Mancopolis (comic story)
- You may be looking for the titular city.
Mancopolis was the two hundredth and eighth comic strip published in Doctor Who Magazine, beginning on 4 January 2024[1] by Panini Magazines and written by Alan Barnes.
It marked the comic strip debuts of the Fifteenth Doctor and Ruby Sunday, depicting an unspecified point in their travels.
It was notably the first story in any medium to depict Ruby taking a trip in the TARDIS, predating any such trip in televised media.
Plot
Part One: Mancopolis
08:30 am in the city of the north, and in a futuristic high-rise building, a bespectacled man named Gerry pleads with his boss, Mayor Mary Mulberry, to be honest with the public about the collapsing economy. She deflects him, claiming that the early meeting has made him difficult, despite her claiming it to be a breakfast meeting. Upon his admission that he has been in contact with Galactic Central Exchange to send the auditors in on her, Mulberry admits that her Internal Affairs team has intercepted his call and informed her. No longer wanting to work with a "snitch", she has him teleported to a dark chamber where he is attacked by wet, fanged creatures, informing Gerry over their watches that he is the breakfast.
An hour and fifteen minutes later, the Fifteenth Doctor and Ruby Sunday arrive in the TARDIS above Jason Orange Plaza. The Doctor proudly shows her their location: her childhood home city of Manchester in 2424, shocking her. He points to all the skyscrapers named after legendary figures from the city's history and a strange cloud, but Ruby instead notices that they have landed upon a tram track. Realising the danger they are in as a futuristic tram hurtles towards them, they dodge it and it stops just in time, but they are immediately surrounded by the Care Fleet vehicle's masked occupants — the Care Force, who accuse them of being tram raiders and order them to surrender. As they do, a baby-faced cloud appears, claiming to be a witness to the Doctor and Ruby having unhappy faces and dares them to try and make the Care Force go away. When they fail to do so, it begins raining on the duo impetuously. Ruby, annoyed, sarcastically states that they are definitely in Manchester.
Part Two: Smile!
Across the 500 square miles of gleaming towers, the twenty million residents of what is now known as Mancopolis all head to work at the Salford Textile Zone to the "hymn[s] of Gracie".
Meanwhile, the Doctor tells Ruby to smile, pleasing the cloud, and it stops raining on them. The Doctor explains how the cloud — a weather orb — works to Ruby and she asks Care Force member #07371 if she wears her helmet because she is unable to smile. However, the mayor interrupts her before she can respond by telling her to remove her helmet, communicating via the windows of a nearby tower that doubles as a screen. #07371 reveals her face and name — Zhi — while the mayor continues talking, incorrectly believing the Doctor and Ruby were the auditors from the Galactic Central Exchange, let in by Gerry before his disposal, which the duo goes along with.
The mayor orders Zhi to bring the Doctor and Ruby to Mancopolis City Hall; she transports them in the antigravity Care Fleet vehicle whilst explaining how the mayor had saved the city after the 2399 Event, giving the residents jobs in cotton mills, even though since then vacancies had opened. Ruby is concerned that even though the residents are all smiling on their commute, none are laughing. The shuttle stops outside the window of the mayor's office, through which the duo enter — it is constructed from porous glass.
Mayor Mulberry condemns how the Doctor and Ruby distracted her from the arrival of an assault ship that sneaked into the city, perceiving their actions as a deliberate diversion. She has the ship destroyed, an action that she understands likely caused the deaths of people below in LS Lowry Square but shirks responsibility before offering a negotiation for the city's economy; the duo asks for chairs to sit on before they continue, but the mayor tells them to transform into their natural form, believing them to be shape-shifting non-humans. Ruby asks the Doctor if the mayor thinks they are aliens, which offends her and she transforms into her huge white silkmoth-like true appearance as a Lepidopteran. The mayor deduces that the Doctor and Ruby are imposters, threatening to dismember one of them whilst the other confesses, so the duo flees into the lift... which is actually the mayor's teleporter. They find themselves in a dark space, about to be attacked by seemingly giant silkworms!
Part Three: Sub-Culture
The Doctor acts quickly and stuns the giant silkworms with a sonic pulse from his sonic screwdriver and Ruby uses her phone's torch to get them to safety, climbing out of the knee-high water and realising they are in a canal. However, she soon realises the truth of their surroundings that the Doctor had tried to keep from her: it is the real Manchester, long since left dilapidated and lifeless with a giant concrete roof built as the foundation of Mancopolis overhead.
She admires some of the old buildings but is interrupted as two Lepidopterans arrive, communicating with Mayor Mulberry as they hunt her and the Doctor. Ruby uses her local knowledge to lose them. From her office, the mayor, back in her human form, tells the silkmoths to lure their targets out with the Care Force as she makes a pitch to the real auditors.
Ruby leads the Doctor to the one place that she knows must still have life — Canal Street — and she is rewarded with discovering a bustling party atmosphere, to the Doctor's joy. He decides to look for some friendly faces and a way back to the surface, so starts mingling with the crowds. However, he is shortly interrupted by some Care Fleet vehicles undertaking a raid, and as the others run away, he tries to get Zhi's attention. Meanwhile, Ruby is accosted by an older woman offering her wristbands to teleport her and the Doctor to safety at a club called the Facility, but when she turns her down, the woman transforms into another silkmoth and forces them on her wrist, snatching Ruby away. The Doctor hears her screams but is too late, only finding her dropped phone left behind.
Ruby finds herself, semi-conscious with her eyes closed and smiling, in a state of bliss inside the Facility. A mysterious noise has caused her to lose control of herself entirely. Meanwhile, Mayor Mulberry begins her auditors' meeting, offering them a business proposition: a new type of Lepidopteran-inspired miracle fabric named Mancopolyester. As she extols its virtues, she explains that it is a form of second skin processed from her new facility, where the "animals" they take it from do not feel a thing as they are boiled alive... and Ruby is the latest to be caught in their cocoons.
Part Four: Power, Corruption & Lies!
To be added
Characters
(In order of appearance)
- Mayor Mary Mulberry
- Gerry
- Fifteenth Doctor
- Ruby Sunday
- Zhi/#7371
- #05932
- #06413
- #07345
- #06392
- Weather orbs
Referenced only
- Fred Perry
- Auditor-General
- Frank Sidebottom
- Olive Morris
- Nana Bonsu
- Jason Orange
- Shelagh Delaney
- Eric Sykes
- Rosetta Tharpe
- John Cooper Clarke
- Lemn Sissay
- George Formby
- Les Dawson
- Erinma Bell
- Pablo Fanque
- Tony Wilson
- Don Estelle
- Gracie Fields
- Pete Shelley
- LS Lowry
- Tommy Cannon
- Victoria Wood
- Sarah Parker Remond
- Albert Finney
- Paul Morley
- Sharon Amesu
- Amanda Barrie
- Mark E Smith
- Henry Hunt
- Mary Fildes
- Emmeline Pankhurst
Worldbuilding
- Chairs, according to Ruby, are objects of "basic hospitality".
- The Doctor states to Ruby that the "answer to her question" is that "massive people-eating silkmoths come from massive people-eating silkworms".
Food and drink
- Gerry was told by Mulberry that they'd have a "breakfast meeting"; she actually intended to feed him to the fanged creatures, having led him to believe that he'd be served something like croissants.
- Mulberry pours herself a cup of coffee.
Manchester
- Manchester, also known as Mancopolis, is a northern city.
- It is a vast walled city and an independent state, spanning five hundred square miles, from the Wigan Watchpoint in the west and Old Oldham in the east.
- An old motorway sign indicates the former location of the M62 and the M6.
- Mulberry is a trusted figurehead to the public.
- Gerry is Mulberry's deputy.
- Gerry metaphorically claims that the interest on the debt contributing to the economic crash is "stratospheric".
- He also metaphorically claims that there is a "black hole" in the city's finances, which they've crossed the event horizon.
- Internal Affairs detected Gerry's communication with the Galactic Central Exchange, alerting Mulberry. After Gerry's admission, she calls him a whistle-blower.
- The Exchange told Gerry that auditors would be sent to Manchester. The Auditor-General also threatened him with extradition.
- Mulberry's office has a desk, chair and computer. It is also furnished with a framed butterfly and a potted fern.
- It is located around one hundred feet above the ground.
- The TARDIS materialises on the Jason Orange Plaza.
- The buildings are named after "legendary figures" from the city's history. Among them are; Fred Perry, Nana Bonsu, Olive Morris, Frank Sidebottom, Shelagh Delaney, Eric Sykes, Rosetta Tharpe, John Cooper Clarke, Lemn Sissay, George Formby, Les Dawson, Erinma Bell, Pablo Fanque, Tony Wilson, Don Estelle, Gracie Fields, Pete Shelley, LS Lowry, Tommy Cannon, Victoria Wood, Sarah Parker Remond, Albert Finney, Paul Morley, Sharon Amesu, Amanda Barrie, Mark E Smith, Henry Hunt, Mary Fildes and Emmeline Pankhurst
- The "gleaming towers" are visible from as far away as the Waste-Midlands.
- The Care Forces' vehicle is named Care Fleet.
- According to Ruby, rain is typical in Manchester.
- Mancopolis has barriers; Mulberry suspects that Gerry gave the Doctor and Ruby a particle key which allowed them to bypass the city's barriers.
- The city has a weather field.
- The Doctor expected some of the original buildings to have survived by 2424, but they had concreted over before Mayor Mulberry constructed the city wall.
- The Mayor gave the residents of the city jobs in the mills and factories that manufacture synthi-materials for spacesuits, which are then exported.
- The Doctor likens the employment of people in mills to cotton mills in 1824.
- Ruby once put all of her birthday money into the Arndale Equitable building society so she, her mother, and her grandmother could afford to visit Hawaii, although it only totalled £19.50.
- Canal Street has establishments called Marquis Cha-Cha, Fiery Jack's, Quando Q, and Psykick Dance Hall.
- A Canal Street reveller claims that the Care Force imprisons people in the Strangeways Sector if they are caught in illegal undercity gatherings.
The Doctor
- The Doctor wears his burnt orange leather trenchcoat.
Individuals
- Zhi's uses the identifier "#7371".
- Mayor Mulberry is some sort of "Lepidopteran", with a digital skin generated by the smartwatch on her wrist.
Technology
- Ruby has never used a teleporter, believing them to only exist in films.
Notes
- This was the first Doctor Who Magazine comic story to feature the Fifteenth Doctor, and the first words spoken by him in his tenure as the incumbent incarnation of the DWM range are: "Yeah, this is it. This is what we want!"
- Similar to Liberation of the Daleks [+]Loading...["Liberation of the Daleks (comic story)"] before it, the story's title is kept entirely secret until the final page of part one, simply being called "Comic strip" on the issue's spine and contents page.
- Although the story's placement in the Doctor and Ruby's timeline is ambiguous, it is likely shortly after The Church on Ruby Road [+]Loading...["The Church on Ruby Road (TV story)"] as they're still wearing similar clothes to what they wore in that episode.
- This story — the Fifteenth Doctor's comic debut in DWM — is set four hundred years after its real-world publication in 2424, similarly to how Liberation of the Daleks [+]Loading...["Liberation of the Daleks (comic story)"] — the Fourteenth Doctor's comic debut in DWM — is set three hundred years after its publication in 2323.
- The Doctor's line in part three, "Never mind the buzz shocks", is a reference to the British comedic music quiz show Never Mind the Buzzcocks.
Production errors
- In the second frame of Part Two, Zhi's number is given as "#07371" (similar to how all the others in the Care Force has a "0" in their designation) however the rest of the time her number is given as "#7371" (without the "0").
Original print details
(Publication with page count and closing captions)
- DWM 599: (6 pages): N/A
- DWM 600: (6 pages): Next Issue: Sub-Culture
- DWM 601: (6 pages): Next Issue: Power, Corruption & Lies!
- DWM 602: (6 pages): Next Issue: Supernova in the Sky
Continuity
to be added
Footnotes
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