Eternal: Revision history

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  • curprev 15:4015:40, 6 January 202482.47.164.96 talk 10,627 bytes +5 Changed "from strong minds" to "strong-willed targets" too, since "could not read minds from [...] from strong minds" sounds off. As an aside; IMO the first Powers paragraph would benefit from being split up into 3-4 smaller paragraphs covering a power each. Are they kept together in a string of "also"s for a formatting reason? e.g. Since they're all exhibited in the same episode so must share the same citation? undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 15:2915:29, 6 January 202482.47.164.96 talk 10,622 bytes −5 My prior Powers edit was somewhat rushed, so I've cleaned it up a bit. Changed "use them" to "use their thoughts", reworded the telepathy examples to flow better as a sentence, shortened & bracketed my allusion to "self-preservation" (Marriner "didn't think of" simply willing Wrack's bomb off his team's ship until after he'd watched The Doctor do it by hand). undo Tag: Visual edit

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  • curprev 19:3419:34, 31 December 202382.47.164.96 talk 10,627 bytes +250 Added to “Powers” section. It didn’t explicitly mention their ability to manipulate matter, or how it relates to their parasitism. So I shimmied it into the beginning as a bridge between the first and second sentences. Just watched Enlightenment and there’s a line from the Marriner/retort from the Doctor in the final episode that sums it all up very nicely, so I paraphrased that as closely as possible. Also noticed an application for telepathy in Ep3, which I included. undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Visual edit

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