Mancopolis (comic story)

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Mancopolis was the two hundred and eighth comic strip published in Doctor Who Magazine, beginning on 4 January 2024 by Panini Magazines and written by Alan Barnes. It marked the comic strip debuts of the Fifteenth Doctor and Ruby Sunday

	Fifteenth Doctor
	Ruby
	Mary Mulberry
	Mancopolis, 2424
	Panini Magazines
	Marcus Hearn
	Alan Barnes
	Lee Sullivan
	James Offredi
	Roger Langridge
	Science fiction
	5
	208
	DWM 599 - 603
	4 January - 25 April 2024
	February - May 2024
	Comic
DWM comic stories
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It was notably the first story in any medium to depict Ruby taking a trip in the TARDIS, predating her first official trip on television in Space Babies ^[+]Loading...["Space Babies (TV story)"], which was broadcast over two weeks after the strip's conclusion.

Plot

Part One: Mancopolis

08:30 am in the city of the north, and in a futuristic high-rise building, a bespectacled man named Gerry pleads with his boss, Mayor Mary Mulberry, to be honest with the public about the collapsing economy. She deflects him, claiming that the early meeting has made him difficult, despite her claiming it to be a breakfast meeting. Upon his admission that he has been in contact with Galactic Central Exchange to send the auditors in on her, Mulberry admits that her Internal Affairs team has intercepted his call and informed her. No longer wanting to work with a "snitch", she has him teleported to a dark chamber where he is attacked by wet, fanged creatures, informing Gerry over their watches that he is the breakfast.

An hour and fifteen minutes later, the Fifteenth Doctor and Ruby Sunday arrive in the TARDIS above Jason Orange Plaza. The Doctor proudly shows her their location: her childhood home city of Manchester in 2424, shocking her. He points to all the skyscrapers named after legendary figures from the city's history and a strange cloud, but Ruby instead notices that they have landed upon a tram track. Realising the danger they are in as a futuristic tram hurtles towards them, they dodge it and it stops just in time, but they are immediately surrounded by the Care Fleet vehicle's masked occupants — the Care Force, who accuse them of being tram raiders and order them to surrender. As they do, a baby-faced cloud appears, claiming to be a witness to the Doctor and Ruby having unhappy faces and dares them to try and make the Care Force go away. When they fail to do so, it begins raining on the duo impetuously. Ruby, annoyed, sarcastically states that they are definitely in Manchester.

Part Two: Smile!

Across the 500 square miles of gleaming towers, the twenty million residents of what is now known as Mancopolis all head to work at the Salford Textile Zone to the "hymn[s] of Gracie".

Meanwhile, the Doctor tells Ruby to smile, pleasing the cloud, and it stops raining on them. The Doctor explains how the cloud — a weather orb — works to Ruby and she asks Care Force member #07371 if she wears her helmet because she is unable to smile. However, the mayor interrupts her before she can respond by telling her to remove her helmet, communicating via the windows of a nearby tower that doubles as a screen. #07371 reveals her face and name — Zhi — while the mayor continues talking, incorrectly believing the Doctor and Ruby were the auditors from the Galactic Central Exchange, let in by Gerry before his disposal, which the duo goes along with.

The mayor orders Zhi to bring the Doctor and Ruby to Mancopolis City Hall; she transports them in the antigravity Care Fleet vehicle whilst explaining how the mayor had saved the city after the 2399 Event, giving the residents jobs in cotton mills, even though since then vacancies had opened. Ruby is concerned that even though the residents are all smiling on their commute, none are laughing. The shuttle stops outside the window of the mayor's office, through which the duo enter — it is constructed from porous glass.

Mayor Mulberry condemns how the Doctor and Ruby distracted her from the arrival of an assault ship that sneaked into the city, perceiving their actions as a deliberate diversion. She has the ship destroyed, an action that she understands likely caused the deaths of people below in LS Lowry Square but shirks responsibility before offering a negotiation for the city's economy; the duo asks for chairs to sit on before they continue, but the mayor tells them to transform into their natural form, believing them to be shape-shifting non-humans. Ruby asks the Doctor if the mayor thinks they are aliens, which offends her and she transforms into her huge white silkmoth-like true appearance as a Lepidopteran. The mayor deduces that the Doctor and Ruby are imposters, threatening to dismember one of them whilst the other confesses, so the duo flees into the lift... which is actually the mayor's teleporter. They find themselves in a dark space, about to be attacked by seemingly giant silkworms!

Part Three: Sub-Culture

The Doctor acts quickly and stuns the giant silkworms with a sonic pulse from his sonic screwdriver and Ruby uses her phone's torch to get them to safety, climbing out of the knee-high water and realising they are in a canal. However, she soon realises the truth of their surroundings that the Doctor had tried to keep from her: it is the real Manchester, long since left dilapidated and lifeless with a giant concrete roof built as the foundation of Mancopolis overhead.

She admires some of the old buildings, including the Arndale Equitable building society where she once put £19.50 of her birthday money. However, she is interrupted as two Lepidopterans arrive, communicating with Mayor Mulberry as they hunt her and the Doctor. Ruby uses her local knowledge to lose them. From her office, the mayor, back in her human form, tells the silkmoths to lure their targets out with the Care Force as she makes a pitch to the real auditors.

Ruby leads the Doctor through the Night-Town to the one place that she knows must still have life — Canal Street — and she is rewarded with discovering a bustling party atmosphere, to the Doctor's joy. He decides to look for some friendly faces and a way back to the surface, so starts mingling with the crowds. However, he is shortly interrupted by some Care Fleet vehicles undertaking a raid, and as the others run away, he tries to get Zhi's attention. Meanwhile, Ruby is accosted by an older woman offering her wristbands to teleport her and the Doctor to safety at a club called the Facility, but when she turns her down, the woman transforms into another silkmoth and forces them on her wrist, snatching Ruby away. The Doctor hears her screams but is too late, only finding her dropped phone left behind.

Ruby finds herself, semi-conscious with her eyes closed and smiling, in a state of bliss inside the Facility. A mysterious noise has caused her to lose control of herself entirely. Meanwhile, Mayor Mulberry begins her auditors' meeting, offering them a business proposition: a new type of Lepidopteran-inspired miracle fabric named Mancopolyester. As she extols its virtues, she explains that it is a form of second skin processed from her new facility, where the "animals" they take it from do not feel a thing as they are boiled alive... and Ruby is the latest to be caught in their cocoons.

Part Four: Power, Corruption & Lies!

The Doctor tastes the leftovers of a short-range teleport that took Ruby as Zhi approaches him, offering her help. She explains that she has heard rumours of the Facility from her sisters, so the Doctor gives her a chance to be a rebel and take them down. She dons her Care Force mask and contacts Control, claiming to have arrested the Doctor, and requests to have him brought to where Ruby has been taken.

With the Doctor handcuffed as part of their plan, Zhi drops herself and the Doctor off on a rooftop, but they are quickly set upon by a group of silkmoths who attack Zhi and threaten to cocoon her too. The Doctor quietly slips out of his handcuffs and sonics the Care Fleet vehicle's headlights, proving irresistible to the silkmoths, letting them make their escape into the Facility. Inside, the Doctor discovers a control panel playing trance music that is keeping the trapped people stuck inside their cocoons and switches it off. Realising that "the young and the beautiful" are being stolen from Night-Town for their skin by the mayor due to a space blockade on external materials, he quickly rescues Ruby and begins his plan to stop Mayor Mulberry.

02:45 pm in the city of the north, and Mayor Mulberry receives word that the Salford Textile Zone and the Trafford Zoomthrough are impassible due to tens of thousands of marching workers, striking en masse demanding her resignation. Zhi tells her that the workers have seen her bodycam footage of the skin factories and that she is leading the marchers herself, with help from the Doctor and Ruby who are making impassioned speeches to the crowd. Mulberry, however, refuses to listen, claiming to be the city's saviour, and calls on her weather orbs to disperse the crowd by force. Terrified, Ruby can only watch on as the orbs use lightning bolts to kill dozens of the protestors, begging the Doctor to do something.

Part Five: Supernova in the Sky

The Doctor freezes upon witnessing the killings, having flashbacks to the same events at the Peterloo Massacre in 1819. Ruby quickly snaps him out of it and he tells Zhi that they need to call in a cavalry of their own, and fast. He sonics her communicator and uses it to send a video message to the auditors, lying in wait in the stratosphere, and informs them that they are free to enter the city with its weather field otherwise engaged. Alerted, they send their fleet of assault ships to repossess the entire city.

Upon witnessing this, the weather orbs stop their attack and Mayor Mulberry berates them for not defending Mancopolis well enough. The Doctor and Ruby use the distraction to break back into Mulberry’s office from Zhi’s vehicle, where Mulberry transforms back into her silkmoth form and attacks the Doctor. Expecting this, he tells Ruby to grab her Lorexx watch and she throws it out of the porous glass window, where the weather orbs destroy it, accidentally deactivating and shattering themselves en masse as a result. Knowing she is cornered, Mulberry returns to her teleport booth and escapes to the lair of her silkworms where, no longer recognising her, they eat her alive, to the Doctor’s regret.

03:05 pm in the city of the north, and Mancopolis’ gleaming skyscrapers have revealed their true states: they have been derelict for over fifty years, disguised by the mayor’s digital cladding. The Doctor goes to meet the auditors, who are revealed to be a species of bipedal snakes. 03:10 pm, and in Jason Orange Plaza, the Auditor-General begins evaluating the city but is interrupted by the Doctor. Although he explains that Mulberry’s debts totalled 299 billion galactic credits and as a result, he has bought out the rights to Mancopolyester, the Doctor interrupts him and describes Ruby as “the richest woman this side of Proxima Centauri”. He explains that the nearly £20 she put into the Arndale Equitable in around 2014 has paid off, gaining approximately 8% compound interest per month as the business grew into an interstellar franchise, totalling 3,153,702,040,000,832 galactic credits to Ruby’s name. The Doctor threatens the Auditor-General to cancel Manopolis’ debts or Ruby will single-handedly crash the economy, and the auditors fly away in their droves - with Ruby promising not to tell that she did not keep the money in the bank at all.

As the auditors leave, the Doctor recommends to Zhi that the Care Force organise a free election for the role of mayor. The Doctor and Ruby return to the TARDIS on the flyover and Ruby rejoices at the feeling of “proper Manchester rain” on her face. 03:33 pm, and across Mancopolis, the liberated citizens flock onto the streets to taste the first real rain in fifty years.

Characters

• Fifteenth Doctor
• Ruby Sunday
• Mayor Mary Mulberry
• Gerry
• Zhi/#7371
• #05932
• #06413
• #07345
• #06392
• Weather orbs
• Auditors
  • Auditor-General

Referenced only

• Fred Perry
• Frank Sidebottom
• Olive Morris
• Nana Bonsu
• Jason Orange
• Shelagh Delaney
• Eric Sykes
• Rosetta Tharpe
• John Cooper Clarke
• Lemn Sissay
• George Formby
• Les Dawson
• Erinma Bell
• Pablo Fanque
• Tony Wilson
• Don Estelle
• Gracie Fields
• Pete Shelley
• LS Lowry
• Tommy Cannon
• Victoria Wood
• Sarah Parker Remond
• Albert Finney
• Paul Morley
• Sharon Amesu
• Amanda Barrie
• Mark E Smith
• Henry Hunt
• Mary Fildes
• Emmeline Pankhurst
• Anthony Burgess
• Alan Turing
• Johnny Marr
• Ruth Ibegbuna
• Joanne Whalley

Worldbuilding

• Chairs, according to Ruby, are objects of "basic hospitality".
• The Doctor states to Ruby that the "answer to her question" is that "massive people-eating silkmoths come from massive people-eating silkworms".

Food and drink

• Gerry was told by Mulberry that they'd have a "breakfast meeting"; she actually intended to feed him to the fanged creatures, having led him to believe that he'd be served something like croissants.
• Mulberry pours herself a cup of coffee.

Manchester

• Manchester, also known as Mancopolis, is a northern city.
  • It is a vast walled city and an independent state, spanning five hundred square miles, from the Wigan Watchpoint in the west and Old Oldham in the east.
  • An old motorway sign indicates the former location of the M62 and the M6.
• Mulberry is a trusted figurehead to the public.
• Gerry is Mulberry's deputy.
• Gerry metaphorically claims that the interest on the debt contributing to the economic crash is "stratospheric".
  • He also metaphorically claims that there is a "black hole" in the city's finances, which they've crossed the event horizon.
• Internal Affairs detected Gerry's communication with the Galactic Central Exchange, alerting Mulberry. After Gerry's admission, she calls him a whistle-blower.
  • The Exchange told Gerry that Auditors would be sent to Manchester. The Auditor-General also threatened him with extradition.
• Mulberry's office has a desk, chair and computer. It is also furnished with a framed butterfly and a potted fern.
  • It is located around one hundred feet above the ground.
• The TARDIS materialises on the Jason Orange Plaza.
• The buildings are named after "legendary figures" from the city's history. Among them are; Fred Perry, Nana Bonsu, Olive Morris, Frank Sidebottom, Shelagh Delaney, Eric Sykes, Rosetta Tharpe, John Cooper Clarke, Lemn Sissay, George Formby, Les Dawson, Erinma Bell, Pablo Fanque, Tony Wilson, Don Estelle, Gracie Fields, Pete Shelley, LS Lowry, Tommy Cannon, Victoria Wood, Sarah Parker Remond, Albert Finney, Paul Morley, Sharon Amesu, Amanda Barrie, Mark E Smith, Henry Hunt, Mary Fildes, Emmeline Pankhurst, Anthony Burgess, Alan Turing, Johnny Marr, Ruth Ibegbuna, and Joanne Whalley.
• The "gleaming towers" are visible from as far away as the Waste-Midlands.
• The Care Forces' vehicle is named Care Fleet.
• According to Ruby, rain is typical in Manchester.
  • She later states that she can taste the Pennines in Manchester rain.
• Mancopolis has barriers; Mulberry suspects that Gerry gave the Doctor and Ruby a particle key which allowed them to bypass the city's barriers.
  • The city has a weather field.
• The Doctor expected some of the original buildings to have survived by 2424, but they had concreted over before Mayor Mulberry constructed the city wall.
• The Mayor gave the residents of the city jobs in the mills and factories that manufacture synthi-materials for spacesuits, which are then exported.
  • The Doctor likens the employment of people in mills to cotton mills in 1824.
• Ruby once put her pocket money into the Arndale Equitable so she, her mother, and her grandmother could afford to visit Hawaii, although she later took it out to buy a top.
  • By 2424, the Arndale Equitable had been renamed as the RNDEqSoc (P.L.C.) and had branches across the Five Galaxies.
• Canal Street has establishments called Marquis Cha-Cha, Fiery Jack's, Quando Q, and Psykick Dance Hall.
• A Canal Street reveller claims that the Care Force imprisons people in the Strangeways Sector if they are caught in illegal undercity gatherings.
• St Peter's Square was once known as St Peter's Field and was the site of a famous uprising six hundred years earlier.

The Doctor

• The Doctor wears his burnt orange leather trenchcoat.

Individuals

• Zhi's uses the identifier "#7371".
• Mayor Mulberry is some sort of "Lepidopteran", with a digital skin generated by the smartwatch on her wrist.
  • The Doctor uses a spin on the idiom "a wolf in sheep's clothing" by referring to her as a "moth in silk clothing."
  • The Mayor has large wings, eyes and mandibles in her true form.
  • Ruby identifies the Mayor as a silkmoth.

Technology

• Ruby has never used a teleporter, believing them to only exist in films.

Notes

• This was the first Doctor Who Magazine comic story to feature the Fifteenth Doctor, and the first words spoken by him in his tenure as the incumbent incarnation of the DWM range are: "Yeah, this is it. This is what we want!"
• Similar to Liberation of the Daleks ^[+]Loading...["Liberation of the Daleks (comic story)"] before it, the story's title is kept entirely secret until the final page of part one, simply being called "Comic strip" on the issue's spine and contents page.
• This story — the Fifteenth Doctor's comic debut in DWM — is set four hundred years after its real-world publication in 2424, similarly to how Liberation of the Daleks ^[+]Loading...["Liberation of the Daleks (comic story)"] — the Fourteenth Doctor's comic debut in DWM — is set three hundred years after its publication in 2323.
• The Doctor's line in part three, "Never mind the buzz shocks", is a reference to the British comedic music quiz show Never Mind the Buzzcocks.
• Ruby stating to Mayor Mulberry that "Today is gonna be the day that we're gonna throw it back to you!" in part four is a paraphrasing of the opening line to the song "Wonderwall" by the Mancunian band Oasis.
• The title of part five, Supernova in the Sky, is a reference to the song "Champagne Supernova", also by Oasis.

Production errors

• In the second frame of Part Two, Zhi's number is given as "#07371" (similar to how all the others in the Care Force have a "0" in their designation), however, for the rest of the time, her number is given as "#7371" (without the "0").

Original print details

(Publication with page count and closing captions)

• DWM 599: (6 pages): N/A
• DWM 600: (6 pages): Next Issue: Sub-Culture
• DWM 601: (6 pages): Next Issue: Power, Corruption & Lies!
• DWM 602: (6 pages): Next Issue: Supernova in the Sky
• DWM 603: (6 pages): The End

Continuity

• The Doctor is wearing his trenchcoat outfit and Ruby is wearing her Christmas Day outfit, both originating from TV: The Church on Ruby Road ^[+]Loading...["The Church on Ruby Road (TV story)"].
• The Doctor once again states that he learnt escapism from Harry Houdini. His friendship with Houdini has been mentioned on many occasions, such as TV: Planet of the Spiders ^[+]Loading...["Planet of the Spiders (TV story)"], The Witchfinders ^[+]Loading...["The Witchfinders (TV story)"], and shortly beforehand by the Fifteenth Doctor in The Church on Ruby Road ^[+]Loading...["The Church on Ruby Road (TV story)"].
• The Doctor experienced a flashback to the Peterloo Massacre, for which he was present in his fifth incarnation in AUDIO: The Peterloo Massacre ^[+]Loading...["The Peterloo Massacre (audio story)"].