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|companions     = [[Melanie Bush|Mel]]      
|companions       = [[Melanie Bush|Mel]]
|enemy          = [[Stapleton Petherbridge]] ([[Time demon]])
|featuring        = [[Christine Bush|Christine]]
|setting         = [[Pease Pottage]], [[1987]] (pocket of [[cauterised time]])
|enemy            = [[Time demon]]
|writer          = [[Matt Fitton]]
|setting           = [[Pease Pottage]], [[summer]] [[1987]]  
|director        = [[Nicholas Briggs]]
|writer           = Matt Fitton
|music           = [[Simon Robinson]]
|director         = [[Nicholas Briggs]]
|sound           = [[Simon Robinson]]
|producer          = [[David Richardson]]
|publisher       = Big Finish Productions
|music             = [[Simon Robinson]]
|release date   = [[January (releases)|January]] [[2013 (releases)|2013]]
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|format         = 2 CDs, 4 Parts
|cover            = [[Mark Plastow]]
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|isbn           = ISBN 978-1-78178-051-0
|publisher         = Big Finish Productions
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|release date     = 14 January 2013
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'''''The Wrong Doctors''''' was the one hundred and sixty-ninth story in [[Big Finish Productions|Big Finish]]'s [[Main Range|monthly range]]. It was written by [[Matt Fitton]] and featured [[Colin Baker]] as the [[Sixth Doctor]] and [[Bonnie Langford]] as [[Melanie Bush]].
'''''The Wrong Doctors''''' was the first story in the 2013 trilogy featuring the [[Sixth Doctor]] and [[Melanie Bush|Mel Bush]], written by [[Matt Fitton]].


== Publisher's summary ==
== Publisher's summary ==
With [[Evelyn Smythe|Evelyn]] gone, the [[Sixth Doctor|Doctor]] sets course for his destiny... in the form of his first meeting with Miss [[Melanie Bush]], a computer programmer from the village of [[Pease Pottage]], currently busy rehearsing with the local Amateur Dramatic Society — and blissfully unaware that her future is on its way, in his [[The Doctor's TARDIS|TARDIS]].
With [[Evelyn Smythe|Evelyn]] gone, [[Sixth Doctor|the Doctor]] sets course for his [[destiny]]... in the form of his first meeting with [[Melanie Bush|Miss Melanie Bush]], a [[computer programmer]] from the [[village]] of [[Pease Pottage]], currently busy rehearsing with the local Amateur Dramatic Society — and blissfully unaware that her future is on its way, in [[The Doctor's TARDIS|his TARDIS]].


Make that two TARDISes. Because at that very moment, a slightly younger Doctor is flying into Pease Pottage, too — returning his future companion Melanie Bush to her rightful place and time, after they were flung together during the course of his [[Time Lord]] trial.
Make that two TARDISes. Because at that very moment, a slightly younger Doctor is flying into Pease Pottage, too — returning his future companion Melanie Bush to her rightful place and [[time]], after they were flung together during the course of his [[Time Lord]] trial.


Time travel is a complicated business — the iguanadon terrorising Pease Pottage being a case in point. But how much more complicated could things possibly become, if the wrong Doctor were to bump into the wrong Mel?
[[Time travel]] is a complicated business — the [[iguanadon]] terrorising Pease Pottage being a case in point. But how much more complicated could things possibly become, if the wrong Doctor were to bump into the wrong Mel?


== Plot ==
== Plot ==
=== Part one ===
=== Part one ===
The Doctor finishes the last piece of chocolate cake that [[Evelyn Smythe]] baked, noting that there won't be any more. Lonely, he thinks its time for Melanie Bush to enter his life. Meanwhile, Mel is auditioning with Mr. Petherbridge, who goes outside to deal with a driver, telling him he should have followed the detour signs as Pease Pottage is closed for heritage matters. The driver refuses to turn around and is attacked by a territorial iguanodon.
Having finished the last slice of [[Evelyn Smythe|Evelyn]]'s [[chocolate]] [[sponge cake]], [[Sixth Doctor|the Doctor]] heads to [[Pease Pottage]] to meet [[Melanie Bush|Mel]] whilst his younger self is dropping an older Mel home following [[The Doctor's trial (The Mysterious Planet)|his trial]], albeit at an earlier [[time]] than intended. The older Doctor hurries off after meeting the older Mel and the younger Doctor meets the younger Mel on her way to work at the [[Pease Pottage Radar Station|radar station]] as he investigates a [[car]] wrecked by an ''[[Iguanodon]]''. The wreck is ignored by Mel and disappears entirely when [[Muriel Wilberforce|Mrs Wilberforce]] orders the Doctor to leave the village.


The [[TARDIS]] arrives in the village: the Doctor is dropping Mel off in her correct time and place, following her relocation to [[Space Station Zenobia]] during [[The Ultimate Foe|his trial]]. After he leaves, Mel notices a cat similar to her tabby and realise it is her tabby, six months before it died. The Doctor has brought her to the wrong time.
The younger Doctor overhears [[Time demon|Mr Petherbridge]] ordering [[Jedediah Thurwell|Jed]], who is wearing old-fashioned [[clothes]], to hold up a [[carriage]] and sneaks into the radar station as the younger Mel is [[hoovering]], finding that Mr Petherbridge has been communicating with a [[spaceship]] in the woods. He goes to investigate what Mel casually refers to as a [[time explosion]] and encounters his older self, whom he saves from a trap on [[Horsham Road]] and makes [[contact]] with. They find that [[the Doctor's TARDIS|their TARDISes]] have disappeared.


''to be added''
The older Mel meets Mrs Wilberforce, who explains that she has been looking after her whilst [[Christine Bush|her mother]] and [[Alan Bush|father]] are on a [[cruise]] but also that she died in [[1964]]. Mrs Wilberforce recognises that this Mel is from the future and decides to take her to Mr Petherbridge, encountering both an ''Iguanodon'' and a ''[[Baryonyx]]'' outside. Although she is unsurprised to see the [[dinosaur]]s, she, like Mel, who memorised 150 species of dinosaur at the age of eight, knows that ''Baryonyx'' is carnivorous and they run away from it.


=== Part two ===
=== Part two ===
''to be added''
The older Mel and Mrs Wilberforce take refuge in [[Beresford (The Wrong Doctors)|Mr Beresford]]'s [[bungalow]] with Jedediah and watch as the younger Doctor uses [[K9]]'s [[dog whistle]] to distract the ''Baryonyx'' until it fades away. He learns that Jed, who goes to hold up a carriage carrying [[gunpowder]], died in [[1884]] and goes with the older Mel to meet up with their other selves in the woods. The older Doctor suspects that the younger Mel is under [[mind control]] given that she claims to have no knowledge of [[computer]]s when he meets her at the radar station and tempts her into coming after him once she calls Mr Petherbridge.
 
The two Doctors, deducing that they are within [[cauterised time]], keep the younger Mel from seeing her older self and decide to split up. The younger pair find that the spaceship belongs to a group of [[Mardak]]s led by [[Vaneesh]], who provide services by transporting goods through the [[Time Vortex]] with unstable [[valanxium]] channels. The Doctor threatens Vaneesh into leaving the [[planet]] but, when she identifies him as a higher life form, she assumes that he is a competitor and orders [[Ksllak]] to incinerate him.
 
As the younger Mel seems enthralled by Mr Petherbridge, the older pair locate him in the village hall and demand to know where the TARDISes are. He demonstrates his powers by showing them [[Victoria|Queen Victoria]]'s [[1837]] visit to Pease Pottage and the transportation of prisoners, including Jed, to [[Lewes Naval Prison]]. He frees the younger Jed, [[Pete (The Wrong Doctors)|Pete]] and other prisoners and has them capture Mel and tie the Doctor to a cart full of gunpowder, handing Jed a flint to light the fuse. Not believing that he has any choice, Jed sets the rope attached to the cart alight.


=== Part three ===
=== Part three ===
''to be added''
Discovering that she is somehow able to alter causality, the older Mel suggests that Jed might have tied a [[slipknot]] and makes it so, allowing the older Doctor to get free and stop the explosion. They head to the radar station, which Mel has no memory of ever working at, and the Doctor deduces that the younger Mel is being used by Mr Petherbridge for her [[eidetic memory]] to control [[alternate timeline]]s and manipulate [[reality]]. The older Mel leaves and the Doctor is confronted by Mr Petherbridge, a time demon from the vortex.
 
Ksllak reminds Vaneesh that [[Mardak Home Corp]] approval is required for the incineration of competitors and the younger Doctor allows them to believe that he has been sent by the Home Corp to test them. The Doctor sends the younger Mel, who is [[invisibility|invisible]] to the Mardak, to tell the older Doctor about the valanxium channel whilst he goes with Vaneesh to the spaceship where he programmes the channel to shut down. Mel forgets about her mission and meets the older Mel, who questions why she is not at [[university]] and goes with her to the village hall to rehearse for Mr Petherbridge's heritage celebration. The Doctor is shown the Mardaks' mine at the [[golf course]], which is full of gunpowder planted there by Mr Petherbridge and the [[Women's Institute]].
 
Mr Petherbridge reveals to the older Doctor that his plan is to kill the younger Doctor and feed off of the chaos that his death will cause to the timelines, namely the erasure of his adventures with Evelyn, [[Thomas Brewster|Brewster]] and future [[companion]]s. The older Doctor will remain as an [[anachronism]] to be consumed by the creatures of the vortex. He runs and finds the two Mels in the village hall, singing a song and counting down.


=== Part four ===
=== Part four ===
''to be added''
The older Doctor arrives at the village hall and Mel knocks her younger self out with a punch to keep the Doctor's past from being erased. He gets Mel to have gunpowder taken to the radio station by Jed and deduces thanks to her and Mrs Wilberforce that Mr Petherbridge has put together a temporal [[daisy chain]] of people stretching from the death of the real [[Stapleton Petherbridge]] in the late [[18th century]] to Mel. With Mrs Wilberforce's blessing, the older Mel returns her to her death, but the Doctor refuses to allow her to further strain herself by doing the same for Jed and Mr Petherbridge and sends her to tell the younger Doctor that he knows where his TARDIS is.
 
The younger Doctor realises that the Maraks have detected the trace of a future valanxium deposit which will only come to be thanks to them being buried and attempts to persuade Vaneesh not to accept Mr Petherbridge's offer of [[human]] [[slave]]s to assist them in mining it. The older Doctor sends both Mr Petherbridge and Jed to their proper places in time to die by taking Mel's place, but Mr Petherbridge refuses to go gently and the younger Mel helps by forcing him into a [[temporal cul-de-sac]]. The younger Doctor makes Ksllak an [[assessor]], tasking him with filling the pit dug at the golf course with the Mardak's supply of valanxium, and the younger Mel dies in the older Doctor's arms.
 
The older Doctor decides that he will return to wearing his patchwork coat as it was the one that the younger Mel preferred. The two TARDISes, used to anchor the pocket dimension, are recovered and the younger Doctor departs with Mel, advised by his older self to visit [[Sheffield Hallam University]]. The older Doctor realises that the younger Mel has been removed from time by the [[Blinovitch Limitation Effect]] and reconstructs her as the older Mel using his TARDIS and the radio station. In 36 Downview Crescent, Mel wakes up and is berated by her mother for napping.


== Cast ==
== Cast ==
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* [[Melanie Bush]] - [[Bonnie Langford]]
* [[Melanie Bush]] - [[Bonnie Langford]]
* [[Stapleton Petherbridge]] - [[Tony Gardner]]
* [[Stapleton Petherbridge]] - [[Tony Gardner]]
* [[Jedediah Thurwell]] - [[James Joyce]]
* [[Jedediah Thurwell]] - [[James Joyce (actor)|James Joyce]]
* [[Muriel Wilberforce|Mrs Wilberforce]] - [[Patricia Leventon]]
* [[Muriel Wilberforce|Mrs Wilberforce]] - [[Patricia Leventon]]
* [[Vaneesh]] / [[Millicent]] / [[Christine Bush]] - [[Beth Chalmers]]
* [[Vaneesh]] / [[Millicent]] / [[Christine Bush]] - [[Beth Chalmers]]
* [[Ksllak]] - [[John Banks]]
* [[Ksllak]] - [[John Banks]]
== References ==
 
* The younger Doctor is wearing his multi-coloured coat whereas the older Doctor is wearing his blue one.
== Crew ==
 
* Cover Art - [[Mark Plastow]]
* Director - [[Nicholas Briggs]]
* Executive Producers - Nicholas Briggs and [[Jason Haigh-Ellery]]
* Music and Sound Design - [[Simon Robinson]]
* Producer - [[David Richardson]]
* Script Editor - [[Alan Barnes]]
* Writer - [[Matt Fitton]]
 
== Worldbuilding ==
* When the older Doctor realises that he has crossed his timestream, he is relieved that it is not another incarnation with their [[Fourth Doctor|scarves]], [[Third Doctor|frills]] or [[Fifth Doctor|celery]].
* When the older Doctor realises that he has crossed his timestream, he is relieved that it is not another incarnation with their [[Fourth Doctor|scarves]], [[Third Doctor|frills]] or [[Fifth Doctor|celery]].
* The younger Doctor describes Mel as "invisible and ineffectual."
* When she first met the younger Doctor, the younger Mel believed that he was going to audition for ''[[Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat]]''.
* When she first met the younger Doctor, the younger Mel believed that he was going to audition for ''[[Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat]]''.
* At the age of eight, Mel committed the names of 150 different species of [[dinosaur]]s to memory and is therefore able to recognise an [[iguanodon]] on sight.
* At the age of eight, Mel committed the names of 150 different species of [[dinosaur]]s to memory and is therefore able to recognise an [[iguanodon]] on sight.
* When Petherbridge talks about wiping the Doctor from existence, he refers to his travels with the [[Evelyn Smythe|scholar]], the [[Thomas Brewster|thief]] and the [[Charlotte Pollard|girls you met and never met…or are they yet to come]].
* [[Stapleton Petherbridge]] was born in Pease Pottage in [[1758]]. He was impressed into the [[Royal Navy]] in [[1810]] and was killed during the [[War of 1812]]. He was possessed by a [[time demon]].
* Stapleton Petherbridge was born in Pease Pottage in [[1758]]. He was impressed into the [[Royal Navy]] in [[1810]] and was killed during the [[War of 1812]]. He was either possessed or his identity was taken by a [[time demon]].
* [[Jedediah Thurwell]] was born in [[1812]]. He was deported to [[Victoria (state)|Victoria]], [[Australia]], where he met a woman named Patsy. They later married and had four children and fifteen grandchildren. He died on his farm in [[1884]] at the age of 71.
* Jedediah Thurwell was born in [[1812]]. He was deported to [[Victoria (state)|Victoria]], [[Australia]], where he met a woman named Patsy. They later married and had four children and fifteen grandchildren. He died on his farm in [[1884]] at the age of 71.
* [[Muriel Wilberforce]] was born in 1884. She and her husband [[Francis Wilberforce]] were married in [[1910]] while their son [[Francis Wilberforce, Jr.]] was born in [[1912]]. Her husband was killed in the [[World War I|First World War]] in [[1914]]. After [[World War II]], she continued working at the Pease Pottage Post Office until she was well past [[retirement]] age. She was the chairwoman of the Pease Pottage [[Women's Institute]] from [[1922]] to [[1964]], serving in that position for longer than anyone else. She died in 1964 at the age of 80. During the [[1980s]], her grandson [[Martin Wilberforce]] ran the post office.
* Petherbridge refers to the creatures that live in the [[Time Vortex]] such as the [[Vortisaur]]s, [[Chronovore]]s and the [[Pantophagen]], stating that they are attracted and hungry for Mel as she is a weak point in space-time due to her timeline with the Doctor crossing itself.
* Muriel Wilberforce was born in 1884. She and her husband [[Francis Wilberforce]] were married in [[1910]] while their son [[Francis Wilberforce, Jr.]] was born in [[1912]]. Her husband was killed in the [[World War I|First World War]] in [[1914]]. After [[World War II]], she continued working at the Pease Pottage Post Office until she was well past [[retirement]] age. She was the chairwoman of the Pease Pottage [[Women's Institute]] from [[1922]] to [[1964]], serving in that position for longer than anyone else. She died in 1964 at the age of 80. During the [[1980s]], her grandson [[Martin Wilberforce]] ran the post office.
* After naming "Mel A" and "Mel B" the two versions of Melanie, jokes about the [[Spice Girls]] (which included Mel B and Mel C among its members) are made, including a pun to the title of the song ''Spice Up Your Life''.
* After naming "Mel A" and "Mel B" the two versions of Melanie, jokes about the [[Spice Girls]] (which included Mel B and Mel C among its members) are made, including a pun to the title of the song ''Spice Up Your Life''.
*Pease Pottage is in a pocket of [[cauterised time]], detached from the mainstream of time.
* Pease Pottage is in a pocket of [[cauterised time]], detached from the mainstream of time.
*Mel was born in [[1964]].
* Mel was born in [[1964]].


== Notes ==
== Notes ==
* This marks the first appearance of [[Bonnie Langford]] as [[Melanie Bush]] in a Big Finish audio drama since [[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Vanity Box (audio story)|The Vanity Box]]'' in July 2007.
* This marks the first appearance of [[Bonnie Langford]] as [[Melanie Bush]] in a Big Finish audio drama since ''[[The Vanity Box (audio story)|The Vanity Box]]'' in July 2007, while also, technically, being the first chronological story of the character in the DWU.
* This audio drama was recorded on [[1 May (production)|1]] and [[2 May (production)|2 May]] 2012
* This audio drama was recorded on [[1 May (production)|1]] and [[2 May (production)|2 May]] [[2012 (releases)|2012]] at the [[The Moat Studios|Moat Studios]].
* This story has some resemblance to the second serial of ''Sapphire and Steel'', where an entity makes deals with deceased people and manipulates time.
* This story has some resemblance to the second serial of ''Sapphire and Steel'', where an entity makes deals with deceased people and manipulates time.
* Big Finish released the [https://soundcloud.com/big-finish/podcast-january-2013-1-preview?in=big-finish/sets/big-finish-podcasts first episode] of the story as a podcast prior to release.
* Big Finish released [https://soundcloud.com/big-finish/podcast-january-2013-1-preview?in=big-finish/sets/big-finish-podcasts the first episode] of the story as a podcast prior to release.
* The cover for this story features a new version of the ''Doctor Who'' logo, which appears in a motif similar to the title sequence from the [[William Hartnell]] era, and was also used for other ''Doctor Who'' related merchandise.


== Continuity ==
== Continuity ==
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* The older Doctor advises his younger self to brush up on his history and recommends that he take a trip to [[Sheffield Hallam University]]. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Marian Conspiracy (audio story)|The Marian Conspiracy]]'')
* The older Doctor advises his younger self to brush up on his history and recommends that he take a trip to [[Sheffield Hallam University]]. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Marian Conspiracy (audio story)|The Marian Conspiracy]]'')
* Petherbridge refers to the [[Vortisaur]]s, ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[Storm Warning (audio story)|Storm Warning]]'') the [[Chronovore]]s ([[TV]]: ''[[The Time Monster (TV story)|The Time Monster]]'') and the [[Pantophagen]]s. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Foe from the Future (audio story)|The Foe from the Future]]'')
* Petherbridge refers to the [[Vortisaur]]s, ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[Storm Warning (audio story)|Storm Warning]]'') the [[Chronovore]]s ([[TV]]: ''[[The Time Monster (TV story)|The Time Monster]]'') and the [[Pantophagen]]s. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Foe from the Future (audio story)|The Foe from the Future]]'')
* In an alternate timeline, [[Ace]] called the Sixth Doctor "Joseph" from ''Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat'' too. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Light at the End]]'')
* When Petherbridge talks about wiping the Doctor from existence, he refers to his travels with [[Evelyn Smythe|the scholar]], [[Thomas Brewster|the thief]] and [[Charlotte Pollard|the girls you met and never met...or are they yet to come]].
* The older Doctor proves his identity to the younger by [[telepathic contact]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Three Doctors (TV story)|The Three Doctors]]'' onwards)
* In an [[alternate timeline]], [[Ace]] likewise compared the Sixth Doctor to Joseph from ''Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat''. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Light at the End (audio story)|The Light at the End]]'')
* Melanie has an [[eidetic memory]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Terror of the Vervoids (TV story)|Terror of the Vervoids]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[Spaceport Fear]]'')
* The older Doctor proves his identity to the younger by [[telepathic contact]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Three Doctors (TV story)|The Three Doctors]]'', et. al)
* Melanie has an [[eidetic memory]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Terror of the Vervoids (TV story)|Terror of the Vervoids]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[Spaceport Fear (audio story)|Spaceport Fear]]'')


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The Wrong Doctors was the one hundred and sixty-ninth story in Big Finish's monthly range. It was written by Matt Fitton and featured Colin Baker as the Sixth Doctor and Bonnie Langford as Melanie Bush.

Publisher's summary[[edit] | [edit source]]

With Evelyn gone, the Doctor sets course for his destiny... in the form of his first meeting with Miss Melanie Bush, a computer programmer from the village of Pease Pottage, currently busy rehearsing with the local Amateur Dramatic Society — and blissfully unaware that her future is on its way, in his TARDIS.

Make that two TARDISes. Because at that very moment, a slightly younger Doctor is flying into Pease Pottage, too — returning his future companion Melanie Bush to her rightful place and time, after they were flung together during the course of his Time Lord trial.

Time travel is a complicated business — the iguanadon terrorising Pease Pottage being a case in point. But how much more complicated could things possibly become, if the wrong Doctor were to bump into the wrong Mel?

Plot[[edit] | [edit source]]

Part one[[edit] | [edit source]]

Having finished the last slice of Evelyn's chocolate sponge cake, the Doctor heads to Pease Pottage to meet Mel whilst his younger self is dropping an older Mel home following his trial, albeit at an earlier time than intended. The older Doctor hurries off after meeting the older Mel and the younger Doctor meets the younger Mel on her way to work at the radar station as he investigates a car wrecked by an Iguanodon. The wreck is ignored by Mel and disappears entirely when Mrs Wilberforce orders the Doctor to leave the village.

The younger Doctor overhears Mr Petherbridge ordering Jed, who is wearing old-fashioned clothes, to hold up a carriage and sneaks into the radar station as the younger Mel is hoovering, finding that Mr Petherbridge has been communicating with a spaceship in the woods. He goes to investigate what Mel casually refers to as a time explosion and encounters his older self, whom he saves from a trap on Horsham Road and makes contact with. They find that their TARDISes have disappeared.

The older Mel meets Mrs Wilberforce, who explains that she has been looking after her whilst her mother and father are on a cruise but also that she died in 1964. Mrs Wilberforce recognises that this Mel is from the future and decides to take her to Mr Petherbridge, encountering both an Iguanodon and a Baryonyx outside. Although she is unsurprised to see the dinosaurs, she, like Mel, who memorised 150 species of dinosaur at the age of eight, knows that Baryonyx is carnivorous and they run away from it.

Part two[[edit] | [edit source]]

The older Mel and Mrs Wilberforce take refuge in Mr Beresford's bungalow with Jedediah and watch as the younger Doctor uses K9's dog whistle to distract the Baryonyx until it fades away. He learns that Jed, who goes to hold up a carriage carrying gunpowder, died in 1884 and goes with the older Mel to meet up with their other selves in the woods. The older Doctor suspects that the younger Mel is under mind control given that she claims to have no knowledge of computers when he meets her at the radar station and tempts her into coming after him once she calls Mr Petherbridge.

The two Doctors, deducing that they are within cauterised time, keep the younger Mel from seeing her older self and decide to split up. The younger pair find that the spaceship belongs to a group of Mardaks led by Vaneesh, who provide services by transporting goods through the Time Vortex with unstable valanxium channels. The Doctor threatens Vaneesh into leaving the planet but, when she identifies him as a higher life form, she assumes that he is a competitor and orders Ksllak to incinerate him.

As the younger Mel seems enthralled by Mr Petherbridge, the older pair locate him in the village hall and demand to know where the TARDISes are. He demonstrates his powers by showing them Queen Victoria's 1837 visit to Pease Pottage and the transportation of prisoners, including Jed, to Lewes Naval Prison. He frees the younger Jed, Pete and other prisoners and has them capture Mel and tie the Doctor to a cart full of gunpowder, handing Jed a flint to light the fuse. Not believing that he has any choice, Jed sets the rope attached to the cart alight.

Part three[[edit] | [edit source]]

Discovering that she is somehow able to alter causality, the older Mel suggests that Jed might have tied a slipknot and makes it so, allowing the older Doctor to get free and stop the explosion. They head to the radar station, which Mel has no memory of ever working at, and the Doctor deduces that the younger Mel is being used by Mr Petherbridge for her eidetic memory to control alternate timelines and manipulate reality. The older Mel leaves and the Doctor is confronted by Mr Petherbridge, a time demon from the vortex.

Ksllak reminds Vaneesh that Mardak Home Corp approval is required for the incineration of competitors and the younger Doctor allows them to believe that he has been sent by the Home Corp to test them. The Doctor sends the younger Mel, who is invisible to the Mardak, to tell the older Doctor about the valanxium channel whilst he goes with Vaneesh to the spaceship where he programmes the channel to shut down. Mel forgets about her mission and meets the older Mel, who questions why she is not at university and goes with her to the village hall to rehearse for Mr Petherbridge's heritage celebration. The Doctor is shown the Mardaks' mine at the golf course, which is full of gunpowder planted there by Mr Petherbridge and the Women's Institute.

Mr Petherbridge reveals to the older Doctor that his plan is to kill the younger Doctor and feed off of the chaos that his death will cause to the timelines, namely the erasure of his adventures with Evelyn, Brewster and future companions. The older Doctor will remain as an anachronism to be consumed by the creatures of the vortex. He runs and finds the two Mels in the village hall, singing a song and counting down.

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The older Doctor arrives at the village hall and Mel knocks her younger self out with a punch to keep the Doctor's past from being erased. He gets Mel to have gunpowder taken to the radio station by Jed and deduces thanks to her and Mrs Wilberforce that Mr Petherbridge has put together a temporal daisy chain of people stretching from the death of the real Stapleton Petherbridge in the late 18th century to Mel. With Mrs Wilberforce's blessing, the older Mel returns her to her death, but the Doctor refuses to allow her to further strain herself by doing the same for Jed and Mr Petherbridge and sends her to tell the younger Doctor that he knows where his TARDIS is.

The younger Doctor realises that the Maraks have detected the trace of a future valanxium deposit which will only come to be thanks to them being buried and attempts to persuade Vaneesh not to accept Mr Petherbridge's offer of human slaves to assist them in mining it. The older Doctor sends both Mr Petherbridge and Jed to their proper places in time to die by taking Mel's place, but Mr Petherbridge refuses to go gently and the younger Mel helps by forcing him into a temporal cul-de-sac. The younger Doctor makes Ksllak an assessor, tasking him with filling the pit dug at the golf course with the Mardak's supply of valanxium, and the younger Mel dies in the older Doctor's arms.

The older Doctor decides that he will return to wearing his patchwork coat as it was the one that the younger Mel preferred. The two TARDISes, used to anchor the pocket dimension, are recovered and the younger Doctor departs with Mel, advised by his older self to visit Sheffield Hallam University. The older Doctor realises that the younger Mel has been removed from time by the Blinovitch Limitation Effect and reconstructs her as the older Mel using his TARDIS and the radio station. In 36 Downview Crescent, Mel wakes up and is berated by her mother for napping.

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  • This marks the first appearance of Bonnie Langford as Melanie Bush in a Big Finish audio drama since The Vanity Box in July 2007, while also, technically, being the first chronological story of the character in the DWU.
  • This audio drama was recorded on 1 and 2 May 2012 at the Moat Studios.
  • This story has some resemblance to the second serial of Sapphire and Steel, where an entity makes deals with deceased people and manipulates time.
  • Big Finish released the first episode of the story as a podcast prior to release.
  • The cover for this story features a new version of the Doctor Who logo, which appears in a motif similar to the title sequence from the William Hartnell era, and was also used for other Doctor Who related merchandise.

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