A Good Man Goes to War (TV story)

A Good Man Goes to War
Doctor:	[[doctor::Eleventh Doctor]]
Companion(s):	Amy Pond Rory Williams
Main enemy:	Madame Kovarian Colonel Manton Headless Monks The Church Cybermen
Main setting:	Demon's Run Stormcage Containment Facility London, 1888 Battle of Zaruthstra, 4037 Cyber Ship The Maldovarium
Key crew
Writer:	Steven Moffat
Director:	Peter Hoar
Producer:	Marcus Wilson
Release details
Story number:	218a
Premiere broadcast:	4 June 2011
Premiere network:	BBC One
Format:	1x 50 minute episode
Production code:	6.7
Confidential:	[[confidential::The Born Identity|The Born Identity]]
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A Good Man Goes to War was the seventh episode in the sixth series of Doctor Who and the last episode of the spring half of the series. Narratively, it was significant for revealing the identity of River Song, naming her as Melody Pond, the daughter of Amy Pond and Rory Williams. Additionally, it saw the reappearances of several of the Doctor's allies and enemies - and the introduction of several previously unseen friends. It also showed the extent to which the Doctor had become feared, and the lengths to which those who feared him were willing to go to be rid of him.

Synopsis

Amy Pond has been kidnapped and the Doctor is raising an army to rescue her. As Rory and he race across galaxies, calling in long-held debts and solemnly given promises, his enemies set a carefully concealed trap. In her cell in Stormcage, River Song sadly acknowledges that the time has come at last – today will mark the Battle of Demon's Run and the Doctor’s darkest hour. Both sides will make their sacrifices and River Song must finally reveal her most closely guarded secret to the Doctor.

Plot

On the Demon's Run base, Amy calms her infant daughter, Melody Pond, as Cleric guards and Madame Kovarian, look on. Amy tells Melody of her father. He looks young, but has lived for hundreds of years and he is coming for them, so their captors had better beware: he is the Last Centurion.

On the faraway flagship of the Twelfth Cyber Legion light, Cybermen detect an intruder working his way to their command center, wreaking havoc with a sonic screwdriver. He breaks in and confronts them. Rory has a message from the Doctor and a question from himself: where is his wife? When the Cybermen demand the Doctor's message, the ships around them explode. Rory asks if he needs to repeat the question.

On Demon's Run the Fat Man and the Thin Man see Lorna sewing on her break. The three discuss the Headless Monks, allied with the military. Lorna says they believe "the domain of faith is the heart, and the domain of doubt is the head" -- hence "headless." The Fat Man leaves with the monks to complete a conversion tutorial. The Thin Man deduces Lorna has met the Doctor. She says it was when she was a child in the Gamma Forest. He told her to run. Meanwhile, the Fat Man is brought to the Headless Monks' headquarters and told he has been selected for conversion to their faith and must make a donation. The Monks advance on him with an empty box.

In a Victorian vestibule, where a Silurian named Madame Vastra has just eaten Jack the Ripper; at the 41st century Battle of Zaruthstra where a Sontaran named Strax is serving penance as a nurse; in the 52nd century Maldovarium, where Dorium Maldovar has just warned Colonel Manton and Madame Kovarian that the Doctor is coming; inside the Stormcage Containment Facility, where a tipsy River Song has just returned from an outing with the Doctor: each is asked to come help the Doctor. Only River Song refuses. She may only be there at the end.

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Jenny shows Vastra the TARDIS is waiting.

At Demon's Run, Colonel Manton speaks to the assembled Clerics and Monks about the Doctor. They must not believe the stories they've heard. Amy watches from above, but is interrupted by Lorna, who offers a prayer leaf with Melody's name sewn on it in the language of her people. Amy ignores the

Manton speaks at the rally.

gift but softens when she realises Lorna has met the Doctor. She accepts it and warns Lorna to be on the right side when the Doctor comes. Lorna hurries to the speech, arriving as Manton says he has received divine permission to lower the hoods of the Headless Monks. He reveals knots of skin in place of a neck and head. The third monk lowers his own hood. He is the Doctor. The Monks raise their swords, and all the Clerics but Lorna raise their guns. Lorna smile. In the control room above the hangar, Vastra and Jenny hold two technicians at sword point. They turn off the lights as the Doctor puts his hood up again, calling for Amy to get her coat.

When the lights return, the Doctor is gone. A panicking Cleric shoots a Monk, who turns out to be headless. A brawl ensues. Manton regains control, ordering the Clerics not to fire. He removes his weapon pack and drops his gun as a show of good faith, urging the Clerics to do the same. Lorna spots a Monk using a sonic screwdriver on a door across the hangar. She follows as the rest of the Clerics disarm themselves. An army of Silurians and Judoon materialise. Commander Strax holds Manton at gunpoint, claiming the base. Manton says his fleet will come to help if Demon's Run goes down. The Doctor orders a group of Dalek-upgraded Spitfires to attack and disable their communications.

Kovarian escapes to her ship with Melody in a portable cot. She orders her aides back to the hangar, saying the Doctor must think he is winning "until the trap closes." Unbeknownst to them, Lorna is listening. She runs off. Rory appears and confronts Kovarian. She taunts him, asking how he will take her ship. Henry Avery and his son Toby exit the ship with a captured crewman. Kovarian and Manton are brought to the Doctor, who has joined Vastra and Jenny in the control room. The Doctor tells Manton to order his men to run away. He wants Manton to be famous for those words for the rest of his life, a warning to those who might use the Doctor's friends to get to him.

In her cell, Amy hears someone trying to get in and brandishes a toothbrush. Rory asks her to wait as he unlocks the door with the sonic. Amy says they took Melody, but he enters with the baby in his arms. They reunite tearfully as the Doctor enters. The Doctor talks to Melody, claiming that he can speak baby. Madame Vastra enters, telling the Doctor the Clerics are leaving without any bloodshed. When she gloats that the Doctor has never risen higher, Rory remembers River's warning.

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The Doctor's Army prepares to fight.

The group, minus Dorium and Vastra, gather in the hangar, preparing to leave the base. There is a debate as to why Melody is crying. The Doctor emerges from the TARDIS with a cot, saying the baby is sleepy. Rory and Amy try to come to terms with what has happened and why Amy was kidnapped. Vastra calls the Doctor to the control room. Before he leaves, Amy implores him to tell them something. The Doctor says it was his cot.

In the control room, Dorium hacks into Kovarian's files and finds scans of Melody's DNA, which contain traces of Time Lord DNA. Vastra wonders where Melody was conceived, knowing that Time Lords became what they were through exposure to the time vortex and the Untempered Schism. The Doctor remembers that the first time Amy and Rory were together on the TARDIS in this version of reality was on their wedding night. Vastra deduces that Kovarian wants a part-Time Lord to turn her a weapon. Dorium shares his concerns that victory came too easily and something is wrong. Vastra agrees. The two hurry back to the hangar. The Doctor, scowling, stays, remembering the little girl from 1969 America and the super-human strength with which she escaped from the astronaut suit. Kovarian appears on a view screen in the control roo,. She knows the Doctor has accessed their files on Melody. When he asks what the baby is for, Kovarian says Melody is hope in their war against the Doctor.

In the hangar, Lorna is captured by Strax, who found her eavesdropping. She warns them of Kovarian's trap, but they refuse to believe her, given her uniform; Lorna says she only joined the Clerics to meet the Doctor, a "great warrior." When Amy tells her the Doctor is not a warrior, Lorna confusedly asks why he is called "the Doctor." The lights in the hangar switch off. Strax scans the area, confirming there are no life forms on the base apart from them and the Silurians. Lorna tells him the Headless Monks aren't alive. Elsewhere in the base, the Monks attack the Silurians. As Vastra and Dorium join the others, a force field surrounds the TARDIS and the doors in the hangar lock. Dorium identifies the Monks' chant as their attack prayer and steps forward, hoping to negotiate with them. He is beheaded, his body joining the Monks as they advance on the group. Rory ushers Amy and Melody to safety before joining the others as the real battle begins.

The Doctor is horrified why Melody was kidnapped

In the control room, the Doctor angrily tells Kovarian that a child is not a weapon. She has already lost. He will never let her near Melody again. Kovarian gleefully informs him that fooling him once was a joy, but fooling him twice in the same way is a privilege. Realising what has been done, he rushes off to warn Amy.

Rory, Vastra, Jenny, Strax and Lorna battle the Headless Monks while Amy waits, holding a crying baby. Melody, looking over Amy's shoulder, sees a slot open in mid-air. Kovarian whispers it's time for her to wake up. Melody dissolves into Flesh and Amy screams for Rory as the Doctor arrives at the battle too late. A sullen Rory informs him they know Melody is Flesh. Jenny comforts a distraught Amy. The Headless Monks have been defeated, but Lorna and Strax have are fatally wounded. Rory goes to help Strax, but to no avail. The Doctor tries to comfort Amy, but she backs away from him. Vastra brings the Doctor to Lorna. She says they met once and she fears he does not remember her; the Doctor quells her fears, saying he remembers everyone and that he knows they ran together. After she dies, he asks Vastra who she was

As the Doctor considers giving up, River Song appears. He angrily confronts her, demanding to know why she did not come when he asked. River replies that she could not have prevented the battle. She asks him if this is how he pictured things turning out when he first took off to see the universe. Had he imagined that he would be a man who could make people so afraid at the mention of his name? The Doctor, tired of her riddles, demands to know who she is. She runs to his cot, wondering if he can read what is carved on it; as he does, his expression changes from anger to joy. He bids Vastra and Jenny goodbye, orders River to get them all home safely, and takes off in the TARDIS despite Amy's protests.

Amy and Rory learn River is their daughter

Amy cocks a gun at River and asks what she told the Doctor. River is calm. She hands Amy the prayer leaf Lorna sewed for her, which lies in the cot. It is Melody's name in the language of the people of the Gamma Forest. They don't have a word for "Pond," since the only water in the forest is the river. Amy and Rory watch as the TARDIS translator changes the stitching on the prayer leaf to words they can read: River Song. River says she is their daughter as her parents stare at her, mouths agape.

Cast

• The Doctor – Matt Smith
• Amy Pond – Karen Gillan
• Rory Williams – Arthur Darvill
• River Song/Melody Pond – Alex Kingston
• Baby Melody Pond – Harrison/Madison Mortimer
• Madame Kovarian – Frances Barber
• Dorium – Simon Fisher Becker
• Henry Avery – Hugh Bonneville
• Toby Avery – Oscar Lloyd
• Colonel Manton – Danny Sapani
• Madame Vastra – Neve McIntosh
• Jenny – Catrin Stewart
• Strax – Dan Starkey
• Lorna Bucket – Christina Chong
• Thin Man – Dan Johnston
• Fat Man – Charlie Baker
• Lucas – Joshua Hayes
• Dominicus – Damian Kell
• Captain Harcourt – Richard Trinder
• Eleanor – Annabel Cleare
• Arthur – Henry Wood
• Voice of the Cybermen – Nicholas Briggs

Crew

Executive Producers   Piers Wenger, Beth Willis and Steven Moffat

Written by Steven Moffat	Produced by Marcus Wilson	Directed by Peter Hoar	Director of Photography Stephan Pehrsson	Production Designer Michael Pickwoad	Visual Effects The Mill
Make-up Designer Barbara Southcott	Casting Director Andy Pryor CDG	Music Murray Gold	Costume Designer Barbara Kidd	Edited by Úna Ní Dhonghaíle	Special Effects Real SFX
Original theme music by Ron Grainer  •  With thanks to the BBC National Orchestra of Wales  •  Conducted and orchestrated by Ben Foster  •  Recorded by Gerry O'Riordan  •  Mixed by Jake Jackson  Cybermen created by Kit Pedler and Gerry Davis  •  Silurians created by Malcolm Hulke  •  Sontarans created by Robert Holmes  •  Judoon created by Russell T Davies  •  Ood created by Russell T Davies

General production staff Production Executive - Julie Scott Line Producer - Diana Barton Associate Producer - Denise Paul Production Manager - Steffan Morris Location Manager - Iwan Roberts Location Assistant - Geraint Williams Unit Manager - Rhys Griffiths Production Co-ordinator - Claire Hildred Assistant Production Co-ordinator - Helen Blyth Production Assistant - Charlie Coombes Production Secretary - Scott Handcock Production Accountant - Dyfed Thomas A/Production Accountant - Rhys Evans Script department Script Executive - Lindsey Alford Camera and lighting department 1st Assistant Director - Toby Ford 2nd Assistant Director - James DeHaviland 3rd Assistant Director - Heddi-Joy Taylor-Welch Assistant Directors - Janine H Jones, Michael Curtis Script Supervisor - Lindsay Grant Camera Operator - Joe Russell Focus Pullers - Steve Rees, Jonathan Vidgen Grip - Gary Norman Assistant Grip - Owen Charnley Camera Assistants - Simon Ridge, Svetlana Miko, Matthew Lepper Gaffer - Mark Hutchings Best Boy - Pete Chester Electricians - Ben Griffiths, Bob Milton, Stephen Slocombe, Alan Tippetts	Art department Supervising Art Director - Stephen Nicholas Assistant Art Director - Jackson Pope Production Buyer - Ben Morris Petty Cash Buyer - Kate Wilson Set Decorator - Julian Luxton Props Buyer - Adrian Anscombe Concept Artist - Richard Shaun Williams Design Assistant - Dan Martin Graphic Artist - Christina Tom Standby Props - Phil Shellard, Helen Atherton Standby Carpenter - Will Pope Standby Art Director - Amy Pickwoad Standby Rigger - Bryan Griffiths Store Person - Jayne Davies Props Master - Paul Aitken Props Chargehand - Rhys Jones Dressing Props - Tom Belton, Kristian Wilsher Props Driver - Medard Mankos Props Makers - Penny Howarth, Nicholas Robatto, Alan Hardy Construction Manager - Matthew Hywel-Davies Construction Chargehand - Scott Fisher Practical Electrician - Albert James Graphics - BBC Wales Graphics Draughtsman - Julia Jones Costume department Costume Supervisor - Heather Leat Assistant Costume Designer - Samantha Keeble Costume Assistants - Jason Gill, Yasemin Kascioglu, Frances Morris	Make-up and prosthetics Make-up Supervisor - Pam Mullins Make-up Artists - Vivienne Simpson, Allison Sing Prosthetics - Millennium FX Movement Stunt Co-ordinator - Crispin Layfield Stunt Performers - Gordon Seed, Will Willoughby, Dean Forster Casting Casting Associate - Alice Purser General post-production staff Post-production Supervisor - Nerys Davies Post-production Co-ordinator - Marie Brown Assistant Editor - Becky Trotman On-line Conform - Mark Bright On-line Editor - Jeremy Lott Special and visual effects Visual FX Producer - Beewan Athwal VFX Editor - Cat Gregory Colourist - Mick Vincent Sound Dubbing Mixer - Tim Ricketts Sound Maintenance Engineers - Jeff Welch, Dafydd Parry Dialogue Editor - Paul McFadden Sound Effects Editor - Paul Jefferies Sound Editor - Doug Sinclair Foley Editor - Jamie Talbutt

Not every person who worked on this adventure was credited. The absence of a credit for a position doesn't necessarily mean the job wasn't required. The information above is based solely on observations of the actual end credits of the episodes as broadcast, and does not relay information from IMDB or other sources.
No Ood actually appear in this episode, but they receive a creator credit.

References

Species

• Strax tends to human soldiers, rather than Sontaran troops as part of his punishment. He can produce his own breast milk and demands to wetnurse Melody Pond.
• The Cybermen resemble the parallel Cybermen from Pete's World but without the Cybus logos. It was suggested on the BBC website and later confirmed in REF: The Brilliant Book 2012 that these are the original Mondasian Cybermen. There is no in-universe explanation for the similar designs. Discounting the appearance of a head in DW: Dalek, this marks the first appearance of the original Cybermen on television since DW: Silver Nemesis in 1988.

The Doctor

• The Doctor pulls out his own cot from when he was a baby, complete with Gallifreyan symbols.
• When asked if he has any children, the Doctor replies "No". When asked if he ever had children, he doesn't answer.

Story notes

• This episode was originally entitled Demons Run. It was changed to A Good Man Goes to War, although His Darkest Hour was also been considered as a title.
• A Good Man Goes to War, as noted by Steven Moffat, aside from being episode 7 of this series, is also the 777th episode of Doctor Who. Moffat stated there were no 'seven puns' in the episode as the coincidence was only observed after it was shot.
• The end credits list Russell T Davies as creating the Ood and Judoon. However, no Ood appear in the episode, but in (REF: The Brilliant Book 2012) it is stated that we would have seen Ood Sigma assist The Doctor's Army, but the scene was cut.
• Malcolm Hulke is credited as the creator of the Silurians in the end credits. Strangely, this did not occur in The Hungry Earth/Cold Blood nor The Pandorica Opens.
• The idea that the word "doctor" derives from the Doctor was first advanced by Steven Moffat in a Usenet post in 1995.
• Dan Starkey appears as the Sontaran Commander Strax. He earlier played Commander Skorr in The Sontaran Stratagem/The Poison Sky and Commander Jask in The End of Time. Neve McIntosh also played Silurian sisters Alaya and Restac in The Hungry Earth/Cold Blood.
• According to Steven Moffat, he was unable to include Jack Harkness in the Doctor's army because John Barrowman was busy filming of Torchwood: Miracle Day.
• The TARDIS console room does not appear in this episode. This is the first time this has occurred since Planet of the Dead, over two years earlier. It is the first episode of the Eleventh Doctor era to not have a scene set in the TARDIS.
• The Series 1 & 2 variation of Doctors theme (The Doctor's Theme) plays for six seconds when the Doctor and Vastra are talking about a Time Lord being used as a weapon.
• A variation of All The Strange, Strange Creatures play right before the scene mentioned above.
• This is the first story to include River where the phrase "Hello Sweetie" isn't heard.
• Vastra's first exchange of dialogue - "Thank you, Parker, I won't be needing you again tonight", to which an unseen carriage driver replies "Yes, m'lady" is a reference to Lady Penelope in the Gerry Anderson TV series Thunderbirds, who often exchanged similar words with her manservant, also named Parker. A 2004 live-action version of Thunderbirds featured Sophia Myles of Moffat's DW: The Girl in the Fireplace as Lady Penelope, and Ron Cook, who played Mr Magpie in DW: The Idiot's Lantern, as Parker.
• This episode features a unique sound mix on the opening theme music, which features the sound of the TARDIS. No Series 6 episode before or after featured this version of the theme.
• The title of this episode is much more ambiguous than one would think, partly because of the Doctor's own admission that he is not necessarily a "good man" because he "has so many" rules, and also because of Amy's opening narration, which misled the viewer into thinking she was talking about the Doctor rather than Rory. These two instances lend weight to the idea that the "good man" of the title may refer to Rory rather than the Doctor.

Ratings

• 7.57million (31.0% market share)

Myths

• Karen Gillan is leaving the series and Amy Pond will be killed off at the climax to the spring half of the series. This was proven false.
• River Song will die. This was proven false even before broadcast owing to the fact River's death was shown in the 2008 episode DW: Forest of the Dead
• We will learn of the identity of River Song. This was proven true; she was revealed as the daughter of Amy Pond and Rory Williams.
• River Song has been recently rumoured to be Amy's daughter as well as the Doctor's wife. This was proven true; she was revealed to be Amy's daughter, and later revealed to marry the Doctor.
• We will find out whom River Song killed. Steven Moffat has said "a good man will die – a good man, and a hero to many." This was later proven false and the answer was not confirmed until later in the season.
• The Cybermen will be newly designed Cybermen. The design was largely the same, with the most significant change being the removal of the Cybus Industries logo. The 2012 edition of The Doctor Who Brilliant Book confirms that these are the original Mondasian Cybermen who, for reasons left unexplained, have assimilated the designs of the Cybus Cybermen
• The Cybermen will be planning to trap and capture the Doctor, before freezing him. This was proven false.
• The character named Jenny would be the Doctor's Daughter in her second incarnation. This was proven false.

Filming locations

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Production errors

If you'd like to talk about narrative problems with this story — like plot holes and things that seem to contradict other stories — please go to this episode's discontinuity discussion.

• The credits mention that Russell T Davies created the Judoon and the Ood. The only Series 6 episode that features an Ood is The Doctor's Wife.
• The word "Override" is incorrectly spelt "Overide" on the label for the button which controls the door lock, which two tied up soldiers attempt to press before one is stung by Vastra. (the same error occurs on a graphic in World War Three) Spellings can change over time.
• The Cyber-Leader's mouth glows blue when it isn't speaking when Rory was on the Twelfth Legion's Cybership. (This also happened in The Pandorica Opens)
• When the Doctor is revealed in a cape of the Headless Monks, the two guards beside Madame Kovarian point their guns at him. In the next shot where the army points their guns at the Doctor, the two guards repeat their actions.

Continuity

• The Doctor repeats his belief that "Bow-ties are cool". (DW: The Eleventh Hour, etc)
• The Doctor has said he speaks every language before. (DW: Planet of the Dead)
• The Doctor has several flashbacks to the events in 1969 America. (DW: The Impossible Astronaut / Day of the Moon)
• Rory's Centurion armour and warrior skills, as well as his age, were first shown in The Pandorica Opens / The Big Bang.
• This episode ends the mystery of River Song's identity, a storyline that began in 2008 with DW: Silence in the Library
• While in The Library, River Song commented that the Doctor would make whole armies turn and run. (DW: Forest of the Dead)
• The Doctor gives a brief history of Rory's time in the TARDIS to Vastra. He references Rory facing "sexy, fish vampires", (DW: The Vampires of Venice) dying and being erased from time, (DW: Cold Blood) then becoming "plastic" and coming back (DW: The Pandorica Opens). He also mentions rebooting the universe. (DW: The Big Bang)
• The Doctor mentions that since rebooting the Universe, reality has been altered (DW: The Big Bang), so Rory and Amy were in the TARDIS together for the first time "in this reality" on their wedding night. This creates some uncertainty as to whether the events of the pre-Pandorica Opens stories actually occurred, though it's clear the Doctor remembers them.
• Cybermen, Sontarans, Silurians and Judoon also all appeared in DW: The Pandorica Opens.
• Returning characters that the Doctor calls upon are: Dorium (DW: The Pandorica Opens), "Danny Boy" (DW: Victory of the Daleks) and Henry Avery and his son Toby. (DW: The Curse of the Black Spot)
• The Church make their second appearance after DW: The Time of Angels / Flesh and Stone. Although some soldiers have the rank of Cleric printed on their uniforms, Manton is referred to as Colonel instead of a religious rank such as Bishop. The dates given on-screen mean this is the Church a century after Time of Angels.
• A fake version of Amy and Rory's child turns out to be Flesh. (DW: The Rebel Flesh / The Almost People)
• The Headless monks were first mentioned in DW: The Time of Angels.
• The Fat Man tells the Thin Man a rumour that the Doctor once "chased the Atraxi off a planet" and "called them back for a scolding". (DW: The Eleventh Hour)
• Dorium says that the Headless Monks are customers of his. (WC: Prequel (A Good Man Goes to War))
• The Doctor had created an army composed of some of his old enemies before. (PDA: Warmonger)
• The Doctor is once again referred to as (not being) a Goblin and a Trickster. (DW: The Pandorica Opens)
• "The only water in the forest is the river," which River uses to explain why the people of the Gamma Forest translate Pond to River, was spoken to Rory by Idris. The Doctor said it would mean something someday. (DW: The Doctor's Wife)
• The Untempered Schism is mentioned, referring to how Time Lords became what they were through billions of years of continued exposure to the Time Vortex. (DW: The Sound of Drums / Last of the Time Lords, The End of Time)
• When River appears at Demon's Run, she wears the same outfit she wore in DW: Day of the Moon.
• The TARDIS hum is heard as it is revealed in the Victorian drawing room. (DW:An Unearthly Child, et. al.)

Timeline

For the Eleventh Doctor

• This story takes place after: DW: The Almost People
• This story takes place before: IDW: Down to Earth

For Amy Pond

• This story occurs after: DW: The Almost People
• This story occurs before: WC: Prequel (Let's Kill Hitler)

For Rory Williams

• This story occurs after: DW: The Almost People
• This story occurs before: DW: Let's Kill Hitler

For baby Melody

• This story occurs before: DW: The Impossible Astronaut

For adult River Song

• This story occurs after: DW: The Wedding of River Song
• This story occurs before: DW: The Impossible Astronaut

Home video releases

Released as Series 6 Part 1 with The Impossible Astronaut, Day of the Moon, The Curse of the Black Spot, The Doctor's Wife, The Rebel Flesh and The Almost People on 11th July 2011. It will also be released in a full Series 6 box set in November (UK) shortly after the airing of episode 13.

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