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|season number  = [[Series 7 (Doctor Who)|7]]
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|story number    = 232
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|story number    = 233
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|companions      = [[Clara Oswald (The Bells of Saint John)|Clara]]
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|featuring      = [[Merry Galel]]
|featuring      = Dave Oswald
|enemy          = [[Akhaten]], the [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|Mummy]], the [[Vigil]]
|featuring2      = Ellie Oswald
|setting        = [[Tiaanamat]], [[Akhaten]]
|enemy          = [[Akhaten]]
|writer          = [[Neil Cross]]
|setting        = [[Tiaanamat]], [[Sun-singers of Akhet]]
|writer          = Neil Cross
|director        = [[Farren Blackburn]]
|director        = [[Farren Blackburn]]
|producer        = [[Marcus Wilson]]<br>[[Denise Paul]]
|producer        = [[Denise Paul]]
|broadcast date  = [[6 April]] [[2013]]
|broadcast date  = 6 April 2013
|production code = 3.7
|network        = BBC One
|format          = 1x45 minute episode
|format          = 1x45 minute episode
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'''''The Rings of Akhaten''''' was the seventh regular episode of the [[series 7 (Doctor Who)|seventh series]] of ''[[Doctor Who]]'' produced by [[BBC Wales]]. In it, the [[Eleventh Doctor]]'s new [[companion]], [[Clara Oswald]], took her first trip in [[the TARDIS]] to an [[alien]] [[planet]].
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'''''The Rings of Akhaten''''' was the seventh episode of [[Series 7 (Doctor Who 2005)|series seven]] of ''[[Doctor Who (TV series)|Doctor Who]]''.
 
In it, the Eleventh Doctor's new [[companion]], Clara, took her first trip in [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the TARDIS]] to an [[alien]] [[planet]]. Clara's mother, [[Ellie Oswald]], previously seen in ''[[The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel (webcast)|The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel]]'', was also shown to have passed away [[5 March|eight years]] [[2005|before]] Clara met the Doctor properly.
 
This marks the first time that the [[TARDIS translation circuit]] hasn't worked properly for the Doctor's companion on their first trip to a place where their native language isn't spoken; the Doctor could understand [[Dor'een]] perfectly, but all Clara could hear was aggressive barking. However, Clara could understand Merry's humanoid species and when everyone sang. This could have been one of the TARDIS's signs that it didn't like Clara ([[The Hybrid|for a ''very'' good reason]]), along with refusing to open the door for her; not being able to understand aliens would scare Clara into never staying on as a companion.
 
This marks the first time the Doctor has extensively researched someone he chose to take on as his companion. Although he normally would just accept others without any such action, Clara warranted such investigation because of the other versions of her that the Doctor had previously met.
 
The ''Impossible Girl'' arc continued in this episode, with the Doctor not being able to find any answers as to why there are multiple Claras throughout history. So far, it appears to have been nothing more than a coincidence. However, the Doctor remains suspicious as to whether Clara [[Journey to the Centre of the TARDIS (TV story)|is some kind of trick or trap meant to ensnare him]]. It wouldn't be until two years later in ''[[Hell Bent (TV story)|Hell Bent]]'' that the reason Clara has been a part of the Doctor's life was revealed.


== Synopsis ==
== Synopsis ==
[[Clara Oswald (The Bells of Saint John)|Clara Oswald]] wants to see something awesome, so [[Eleventh Doctor|the Doctor]] whisks her off to the inhabited rings of the [[planet]] [[Akhaten]], where the [[Festival of Offerings]] is in full swing. Clara meets the young [[Queen of Years]] as the pilgrims and natives ready for the ceremony. But something is stirring in the [[pyramid]], and a sacrifice will be demanded.
[[Clara Oswald]] wants to see something awesome, so the [[Eleventh Doctor]] whisks her off to the inhabited rings of the [[planet]] [[Akhaten]], where the [[Festival of Offerings]] is in full swing. Clara meets the young [[Queen of Years]] as the pilgrims and natives ready for the ceremony. But something is stirring in the [[pyramid]], and a sacrifice will be demanded.


== Plot ==
== Plot ==
The wind blows autumn leaves and a wooden gate closes. One large reddish orange [[leaf]] rattles on the [[tree]]. [[Dave Oswald|A young man with dark hair]], dressed in a suit, fumbles with an unfolded [[map]] as he walks down a sidewalk. The Doctor peers out from behind a copy of ''[[The Beano]] Summer Special [[1981]]''. The young man looks around in confusion when suddenly [[Clara Oswald's Leaf|a leaf]] falls from the tree into his face. He stumbles into the street and the path of an oncoming car, but is pulled aside by [[Ellie Oswald|a beautiful young woman]]. She asks if he is all right and he smiles.
The wind blows autumn leaves and a wooden gate closes. One large, reddish-orange [[Clara's leaf|leaf]] rattles on the [[tree]]. [[Dave Oswald|A young man]] dressed in a suit, fumbles with an unfolded map as he walks down a pavement. The Doctor peers out from behind a copy of ''[[The Beano]] [[The Beano Summer Special 1981|Summer Special]] [[1981]]''. The young man looks around in confusion when suddenly a leaf falls from the tree into his face. He stumbles into the street and the path of an oncoming car, but is pulled aside by [[Ellie Oswald|a young woman]]. She asks if he is all right and he smiles.


[[File:Ellie_Oswald_young.jpg|thumb|left|Ellie first meets Clara's father.]]
[[File:Ellie_Oswald_young.jpg|thumb|left|Ellie first meets Clara's father.]]
Some time later, the two are sharing an [[umbrella]] and stumble up to a doorway in laughter. He pulls out the leaf and she asks why he kept it. He explains that, "this exact leaf had to grow in that exact way, in that exact place, so that precise wind could tear it from that precise branch, and make it fly into this exact face at that exact moment. And if just one of those tiny little things had never happened, I'd never have met you. Which makes this the most important leaf in human history." They kiss, and we see the Doctor frown and walk away in the rain.
Sometime later, the two are sharing an [[umbrella]] and stumble up to a doorway in laughter. He pulls out the leaf and she asks why he kept it. He explains that "this precise leaf had to grow in that precise way, in that precise place, so that precise wind could tear it from that precise branch, and make it fly into this precise face at that exact moment. And if just one of those tiny little things had never happened, I'd never have met you. Which makes this the most important leaf in human history." They kiss; the Doctor frowns and walks away in the rain.
 
A montage shows Dave and Ellie raising their newborn daughter Clara. Dave comes to visit Clara in the nursery while Ellie is rocking her. A few years later, Ellie shows toddler Clara her book, ''[[101 Places to See]]''; the little girl enthusiastically points to a location in the book.
 
The Doctor is next seen getting hit in the face by a [[football]] and falls down. He pops up with his hands in a defensive gesture as Ellie asks if he's all right. Among other things, he says that's he's possibly a touch embarrassed and seriously asks if that's dangerous. Laughing, Ellie tells him that it's not. Dave brings primary school-aged Clara over and she's introduced. Dave laughs that Clara is imitating a football player. The Doctor gives a warm smile and greeting to the little girl.
 
A teenage Clara, holding her mother's book, stands with her father in mourning over the [[gravestone]] for "Ellie Oswald, beloved wife and mother, born [[11 September]] [[1960]], died [[5 March]] [[2005]]." Hiding behind a tree, the Doctor watches as neither Oswald can find the words to comfort each other. He returns to the TARDIS, which shows an image of Clara graduating high school on the monitor; he's been investigating her past to make sure she's just a human girl. Information on Oswin, Victorian Clara and the present day version appear rapidly on the screen, much to his increasing disbelief. Frustrated, he pushes the screen away and declares, "She's not possible."
 
[[2013]]. Clara is sitting on the stairway outside [[30 Oak Street|her home]] with her book; she seems impatient, waiting for the Doctor to arrive. She hears the TARDIS land, the door open, and she smiles and jumps up as the doorbell rings.
 
In the [[TARDIS console room]], she asks about the nature of [[time]] ("not made of [[Strawberry|strawberries]]"), and if the TARDIS can go anywhere ("within reason"). The Doctor asks her where she wants to go and see. Clara freezes, saying she doesn't know; it's like forgetting what your favourite book when someone asks you. The Doctor patiently waits by the controls, as Clara thinks to herself about where to go. She smiles and says she wants to see "something awesome". The Doctor complies and begins working at the controls.


We see Clara's father holding [[baby]] [[Clara Oswin Oswald|Clara]], Clara playing as a toddler, and her mother showing her ''[[101 Places to See]]''. The Doctor is hit in the face by a [[football]]. He pops up with his hands in a defensive gesture as Clara's mother asks if he's all right. Among other things, he says that's he's possibly a touch embarrassed and seriously asks if that's dangerous. Clara's father brings her over and she's introduced.
{{video|Welcome to The Rings of Akhaten - Doctor Who The Rings of Akhaten preview - Series 7 2013 - BBC One|thumb|left|"Welcome to the [[Rings of Akhaten]]."]]The Doctor walks her out of the TARDIS, with her eyes closed, into the light of an alien sun. He bids her open her eyes so he can welcome her to the [[Rings of Akhaten]]. A golden [[pyramid]] comes into view. It is the [[Pyramid of the Rings of Akhaten]], a holy site for the [[Sun-singers of Akhet]]. This is a [[star system|system]] of seven [[planet|worlds]], orbiting the same [[star]], and they believe that all life in the [[universe]] originated on [[Akhaten]]. Clara asks if it's true; the Doctor shrugs off the questions, saying that it's a nice story they believe.


We see that  ''101 Places to See'', property of Clara Oswald age 9, had previously been property of Ellie Ravenwood, age 11, as tears cried by a teenaged Clara fall on the book. She closes the book, and is standing in a [[cemetery]]. Her father awkwardly reaches over. They are looking at a [[gravestone]] for "Ellie Oswald, beloved wife and mother, born [[11 September|11th September]] [[1960]], died [[5th March]] [[2005]]". The Doctor watches and returns to [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the TARDIS]]. He reviews her file on the scanner; he's been investigating her past to make sure she's just a human girl. He declares, "She's not possible."
Clara asks to go see it, and the Doctor complies parking the TARDIS in an [[alien]] market.


Clara is sitting on the stairway with her book. She hears the TARDIS land, the door open, and she smiles and jumps up as the doorbell rings. In the [[TARDIS console room]], she asks about the nature of [[time]] ("not made of [[Strawberry|strawberries]]"), and if the TARDIS can go anywhere ("within reason"). The Doctor asks her where she wants to go, and she freezes, admitting that the breadth of options makes it difficult to think of one. The Doctor prompts her until she smiles and says she wants to see is "something awesome."
[[File:DoctorClaraAkhaten.jpg|thumb|right|The Doctor points out species in the market.]]
The Doctor says that most of the people around are local [[species]], and points out some: some [[Pan-Babylonian]]s, a [[Lugalirakush]], some [[Eukanian]]s, a [[Hooloovoo]] and an [[Ultramanta]]. He does a ritual greeting with a [[Terraberserker]] of the [[Cadonian Belt]], mentioning that they're not common. He says he forgot how much he liked it there — he'd been there a long time ago with [[Susan Foreman|his granddaughter]]. Clara's a bit shocked at this confession, but the Doctor's moving fast. She runs after him and he presents her with [[Exotic fruit (The Rings of Akhaten)|a glowing blue fruit]]. She takes a bite as he scans it with his screwdriver. She shakes her head at the taste.
 
The place is crowded because of the [[Festival of Offerings]], and a creature comes up to Clara, barking and growling at her. The Doctor returns, barking himself to communicate, and introduces [[Dor'een]] to Clara. Dor'een had been asking if they want to rent a moped. Clara asks what it costs and the Doctor explains that they don't use money here. They use objects of sentimental value as currency; "[[Psychometry]]. Objects [[psychic]]ally imprinted with their history." She dislikes the idea, thinking it's terrible to have to give up something important to you in trade. The Doctor says it's better than bits of paper, so she says that he should pay, as someone who's a thousand years old should have something that he cares about. The Doctor pulls out his [[the Doctor's sonic screwdriver|sonic screwdriver]], then shakes his head and puts it back.
 
[[File:Dor'een.jpg|thumb|left|Dor'een in the market.]]
Clara turns her back for a moment, finding that the Doctor has walked off again. She goes looking for him. [[Merry Galel|A little girl]], wearing crimson robes, bumps into her and runs off. Shortly afterwards, two men wearing similar robes, presumably monks of the religious order of that system, ask Clara if she'd seen the [[Queen of Years]]. Clara is confused, asking who they mean; seeing that she has no clue, they search on.
 
Worried about the girl, Clara heads for where she ran. This leads her to a messy area filled with junk. The girl runs, and Clara slowly follows. They startle each other and laugh. The girl says she's hiding and is confused and sceptical that Clara doesn't know her. The girl says she needs help to hide, and Clara knows the perfect box. [[Vigil|Three figures wearing black uniforms with brass buttons and facial masks]] appear and start whispering, calling out for the girl. Clara takes the little girl to the TARDIS and tries to open the doors, but they are locked. She rattles the doors a bit, then states that the blue box just doesn't like her. Clara gets a little angry, but she forgets it when the little girl ducks behind the TARDIS. She tells Clara that her name is [[Merry Galel]], and she's the Queen of Years. She was chosen to become this as a baby when the previous Queen died. She knows every story, poem, legend, and song of their culture. She's scared because she has to sing a special song to their god to keep him from waking.
 
Clara tells Merry that everyone's scared when they're little. She had been scared of being lost until she'd gotten lost once. Her mum found her and took her home, and told her that no matter how lost she was, her mum would always find her. Afterwards, Clara was afraid many times, but never of being lost. Merry believes Clara when she tells her she'll get the song right, and Clara takes her back to the men in red robes who were looking for her. The Doctor comes up, eating the glowing blue fruit. He's curious as to what she's been up to, to which Clara tells him that she's been blending in.


The Doctor walks her out of the TARDIS, with her eyes closed, into the light of an alien sun, and bids her open her eyes so that he can welcome her to the [[Akhaten|Rings of Akhaten]]. A golden [[pyramid]] comes into view. It is the [[Pyramid of the Rings of Akhaten]], a holy site for the [[Sun-singers of Akhet]]. This is a [[star system|system]] of seven [[planet|world]]s, orbiting the same [[star]], and they believe that all [[life]] in the [[universe]] originated on Akhaten. Clara asks to go to it.
They wander an [[alien]] [[market]]. The Doctor says that most of the people around are local [[species]], and points out some. He does a ritual greeting with a [[Terraberserker]] of the [[Kodonion Belt]], mentioning that they're not common. He says he forgot how much he liked it there - [[First Doctor|he'd]] been there a long time ago with [[Susan Foreman|his granddaughter]]. Clara's a bit shocked at this, but the Doctor's moving fast. She runs after him and he presents her with [[Exotic fruit (The Rings of Akhaten)|a glowing blue fruit]]. She takes a bite as he scans it with his screwdriver. She shakes her head at the taste.
The place is crowded because of the [[Festival of Offerings]], and a creature comes up to Clara, barking and growling at her. The Doctor returns, barking himself to communicate, and introduces [[Dor'een]] to Clara. Dor'een had been asking if they want to rent a moped. Clara asks what it costs and the Doctor explains that they don't use money, here. They use objects of sentimental value as currency. "[[Psychometry]]. Objects [[psychic]]ally imprinted with their history." She dislikes the idea, thinking it's terrible to have to give up something important to you in trade. The Doctor says it's better than bits of paper, so she says that he should pay, as someone who's a thousand years old should have something that he cares about. The Doctor pulls out his [[sonic screwdriver]], then shakes his head and puts it back.
Clara turns her back for a moment, then goes looking for him. [[Merry Galel|A little girl]], wearing crimson robes, bumps into her and runs off. Shortly afterwards, two men wearing similar robes ask Clara if she'd seen the [[Queen of Years]]. Clara shrugs and they search on.
Clara goes to look for the young girl, and finds her in the back corridors. The girl runs, and Clara slowly follows. They startle each other and laugh. The girl says she's hiding and is confused and skeptical that Clara doesn't know her. The girl says she needs help to hide, and Clara knows the perfect box. [[Vigil|Three men wearing black uniforms with brass buttons and facial masks]] appear and start whispering, calling out for the girl. Clara takes the little girl to the TARDIS and tries to open the doors, but they won't budge for her.
The little girl ducks behind the TARDIS. She tells Clara that her name is [[Merry Galel]], and she's the Queen of Years. She was chosen to become this as a baby, when the previous Queen died. She knows every story, poem, legend, and song of their culture. She's scared because she has to sing a special song to their god to keep him from waking. Clara tells her that everyone's scared when they're little. She had been scared of being lost, until she'd gotten lost once. Her mom found her and took her home, and told her that no matter how lost she was, her mom would always find her. Afterwards, Clara was many times scared, but never of being lost.
Merry believes Clara when she tells her she'll get the song right, and Clara takes her back to the men in red robes who were looking for her. The Doctor comes up, eating the glowing blue fruit.
In a room in the pyramid, a man in red robes sings to a [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|mummy]]. He switches out with [[The Chorister (The Rings of Akhaten)|the Chorister]].
In a room in the pyramid, a man in red robes sings to a [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|mummy]]. He switches out with [[The Chorister (The Rings of Akhaten)|the Chorister]].
Clara and the Doctor arrive to view a ceremony. The Doctor shushes Clara when she tries to ask if they're supposed to be there. There is some grumbling, then silence as Merry looks at Clara before she begins to sing a duet with the man in the pyramid. The Doctor reads the program and tells Clara that they're signing the [[Long Song]], a lullaby to keep the [[Old God]], or Grandfather - the mummy in the temple - asleep. There has been a [[Chorister]] singing this endless song for generations. Others in the audience hold up offerings, gifts of sentimental value, to feed the Old God. The viewers, including the Doctor, join in the song.
The Chorister in the pyramid falters, and they all stop singing, looking around in confusion. The Chorister raises his hood and continues. The ground shakes at the pyramid and in the viewing room, and a golden energy seizes Merry and starts moving her towards the pyramid. She screams and Clara asks if anyone is going to help her. She follows the Doctor, who is already leaving, saying he can't just walk away because Clara talked Merry into doing this. He replies: "Listen, there is one thing you need to know about travelling with me. Well, one thing, apart from the blue box and the two hearts. You don't walk away."
He walks up to Dor'een, barking, then pats his pockets and looks back to Clara. He tells her he needs something. She's confused, saying that he must have something himself. He pulls out the screwdriver, saying, "I don't want to give it away because it comes in handy." She looks down and quietly takes her mom's ring from her hand and hands it over. They take the moped and fly it out to the glowing ball carrying Merry. Clara almost takes her hand, but the little girl flies into the pyramid.


Clara and the Doctor land at a doorway protected by a [[frequency-modulated acoustic lock]]. He says that he really can't open it, as it changes too quickly, but he'll try anyway.
[[File:Merry_singing_to_the_Old_God.jpg|thumb|right|Merry continues the Long Song.]]
Clara and the Doctor arrive to view a ceremony. The Doctor shushes Clara when she tries to ask if they're supposed to be there. There is some grumbling, then silence as Merry looks at Clara before she begins to sing a duet with the man in the pyramid. The Doctor reads the program and tells Clara that they're signing the [[Long Song]], a lullaby to keep the [[Old God]], or Grandfather, asleep. There has been a [[Chorister]] singing this endless song for generations. Others in the audience hold up offerings, gifts of sentimental value, to feed the Old God. The viewers, including the Doctor, join in the song.
 
The Chorister in the pyramid falters, and they all stop singing, looking around in confusion. The Chorister raises his hood and continues. The ground shakes at the pyramid and in the viewing room, and a golden energy seizes Merry and starts moving her towards the pyramid. She screams and Clara asks if anyone is going to help her. She follows the Doctor, who is already leaving, saying he can't just walk away because Clara talked Merry into doing this. He replies; "Listen, there is one thing you need to know about travelling with me. Well, one thing, apart from the blue box and the two hearts. We don't walk away."
 
He walks up to Dor'een, barking, then pats his pockets and looks back to Clara. He tells her he needs something. She's confused, saying that he must have something himself. He pulls out the screwdriver, saying; "I don't want to give it away because it comes in handy." She looks down and quietly takes her mother's [[ring]] from her hand and hands it over. They take the moped and fly it out to the glowing ball carrying Merry. Clara almost takes her hand, but the little girl flies into the pyramid.


The Chorister continues to sing. Merry walks closer, saying that she doesn't know what to do. She screams. The Doctor manages to open the door, but it's very difficult and heavy to hold up. As Merry won't leave, we find that the Doctor can't do anything other than hold the door up. Merry won't leave, as she believes that it is her fault the Old God is waking, and she doesn't believe Clara anymore because Clara was wrong. Now the Old God will eat their souls. She [[telekinetic]]ally pins Clara to the glass around the Old God, and then says that he doesn't want Clara, he wants her, but if the others don't leave the God will eat them too. The Doctor says they're never going to leave, then hums a bar and lets go of the door. Clara asks if they've just been locked in with the [[soul]]-eating monster, and the Doctor says yes.
[[File:MerryScreams.jpg|thumb|left|Merry screams.]]
Clara and the Doctor land at a doorway protected by a [[frequency-modulated acoustic lock]]. He says that he really can't open it, as it changes too quickly, but he'll try anyway. He bizarrely attempts to knock the door down, only succeeding in hurt his shoulder in the attempt; even a Time Lord isn't strong enough to knock down a stone door. Inside, the Chorister continues to sing. Merry walks closer, saying that she doesn't know what to do. The mummy's eyes glow red and she screams.


The Chorister is still trying to sing the god back to sleep, and the Doctor advises he run. He stops, and declares that the Long Song has ended with him. He presses a button on his wrist band and disappears. The mummy begins to move, and the Doctor tells Merry that they didn't wake him, he woke because it was time to wake up and eat Merry.
The Doctor manages to open the door, but it's very difficult and heavy to hold up. As Merry won't leave, the Doctor is unable to do anything other than hold the door up. Merry won't leave, as she believes that it is her fault the Old God is waking, and she doesn't believe Clara any more because Clara was wrong. Looking at the Old God, Clara says "He is ugly, but I don't think he's big enough." Merry tells Clara it doesn't feed on flesh, but souls. She [[telekinetic]]ally pins Clara to the glass around the Old God, and then says that he doesn't want Clara, he wants her, but if the others don't leave the God will eat them too.


He tells Merry that she was intended as a sacrifice for the monster, because if she's going to do this voluntarily she should know why. He tells her a story about how she is unique and he believes that her sacrifice would be a waste. Merry lets Clara go and they begin to run. The [[Vigil]] appear, and Merry says it is their job to feed her to the Old God. They throw off the Doctor and Clara and lead her to the mummy. Clara rouses first and gets the screwdriver to the Doctor. He holds off the Vigil with the screwdriver. Merry sings open the secret song, opening another door. They run, but Clara goes back for the Doctor. He holds back the Vigil again as the mummy breaks the glass, and a beam of light shoots from him into the star.  
[[File:Chorister_Rezh_Baphix_closeup.jpg|thumb|Chorister Rezh Baphix declares the Long Song has ended with him.]]
The Doctor says they're never going to leave, then hums a bar and lets go of the door. Clara asks if they've just been locked in with the [[soul]]-eating monster, and the Doctor says yes. Clara questions if the Doctor can get them out preferably before their souls are eaten, to which he says is possible. Her attention is then drawn to the Chorister, who is still singing; she asks the Doctor why he's even bothering. The Doctor approaches the man, explaining he's attempting to keep the Old God from waking up. With a smirk, the Doctor explains that there is nothing that can be done, the Old God is waking and the best option is to run. The Chorister stops and declares that the Long Song has ended with him. He presses a button on his wristband and teleports away.


The Vigil disappear, and the Doctor says they're gone because Grandfather is awake and they're no longer needed. He declares that he's made a tactical mistake: [[the Mummy]] was not the [[Old God]], but simply the "[[alarm clock]]". ''Akhaten'' itself is the Old God. Merry declares that the entity will eat everyone in the system and then continue across the stars. Clara and the Doctor talk about going somewhere else but she knows he's going to stay to fight it.
The Doctor states that the song is over and aims his sonic screwdriver at the glass case. The mummy awakens with a mighty roar, frightening Clara, whose back is to it; the Doctor passes out the mummy's attempts to break out as him having a stretch. The Doctor tells Merry that they didn't wake him; he woke because it was time to wake up. Merry is as a sacrifice for the monster, because if she's going to do this voluntarily she should know why. Every time the Old God threatens to waken, the Queen of Years is offered as a sacrifice to put him back sleep; it feeds on her story. Clara reminds the Doctor that Merry said it ate souls. The Doctor tells her "Souls are made up of stories. People we lost. People we found against all odds." To calm Merry, the Doctor tells her a story she doesn't know; she is unique in the universe and there won't be another person like her. The Old God is a 'vampire"; it'll eat her soul, but that doesn't make it a god. If Merry doesn't offer herself, everything will be fine.


He sends Clara off to save Merry, and turns to confront the star. Clara returns Merry to the viewing room. Merry wants to help, so she stands and begins singing a new song. The Doctor smiles, and begins to tell a story to the Old God, a story about the people singing to him, and about the things that the Doctor is and knows. His intention is to overwhelm it with his life experience. The star begins to recede. The Doctor slumps to the ground.
[[File:The Vigil.jpg|left|thumb|180x180px|The Vigil try forcing Merry's sacrifice.]]
Merry lets Clara go, just in time for Clara to see that the Old God has started cracking the case. She sneers at the Doctor for downplaying the danger. When they attempt to leave, the temple shakes. Merry explains that if the Queen of Years refuses to be fed on, the [[Vigil]] are to feed her to the Old God. The Vigil appear. They knock the Doctor and Clara unconscious and lead her to the mummy. Clara rouses first and gets the screwdriver to the Doctor. He holds off the Vigil with the sonic. Clara asks Merry if she knows a secret way out of the pyramid. Merry recalls a secret song and sings it, opening another door. They run, but Clara goes back for the Doctor. He holds back the Vigil again as the mummy breaks the glass, and a beam of light shoots from him into the planet. The Vigil disappear and the Mummy appears to die.


The entity eats but swirls back again. Clara takes the moped back. She asks if it's still hungry, then feeds it the most important [[leaf]] in [[human]] [[history]], which is full of her mother's lost life, a whole future that never happened. The entity feeds on the infinite possibilities represented by the leaf. The Doctor, reviving, declares that he must be full, as infinity is too much, even for his appetite. The star recedes again, this time seemingly [[Sleep|asleep]] for good.
The Doctor explains that they're gone because Grandfather is awake and they're no longer needed. He declares that he's made a tactical mistake. He thought the Old God and Grandfather were the same thing, the [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|Mummy]], but "it was just Grandfather's [[alarm clock]]". ''[[Akhaten]]'' itself is the Old God; an evil grinning face appears on the star. Merry states Akhaten will eat everyone in the system and then continue across the stars. Clara and the Doctor talk about going somewhere else but she knows he's going to stay to fight it. He sends Clara off to save Merry and turns to confront the star. Clara returns Merry to the viewing platform. Merry wants to help, so she stands and begins singing a new song. Their resolve to fight back against him shocks Akhaten.


The Doctor returns Clara to her home. She realises that she'd seen him at her mother's grave. He confesses that she reminds him of someone he knew, someone who died. He gives her back [[Ellie Oswald|her mother]]'s [[ring]], saying the people of Akhen had wanted her to have it back because she saved them. She leaves [[the TARDIS]].
The Doctor smiles and begins to tell a story to Akhaten, a story about the people singing to him, and about the things that the Doctor is and knows. Akhaten sends tendrils of energy out of its mouth, which pierce the Doctor and begin sucking out his experiences. ''"I walked away from the Last Great Time War. I marked the passing of the Time Lords. I saw the birth of the Universe and I watched as time ran out. Moment by moment until nothing remained, no time, no space, just me! I walked in universes where the laws of physics were devised by the mind of a mad man! And I watched universes freeze and creations burn! I have seen things you wouldn't believe! I have lost things you will never understand! And I know things, secrets that must never be told, knowledge that must never be spoken! Knowledge that will make parasite Gods blaze! SO COME ON THEN! TAKE IT! TAKE IT ALL, BABY! HAVE IT! '''YOU HAVE IT ALL!'''"'' the Doctor roars. The Doctor slumps to the ground, hurt and exhausted from having his precious memories fed on. Akhaten begins going back to sleep.
 
However, much to the Doctor's horror, Akhaten isn't full; it's waking back up. Clara remembers her mother's words and heads back to the Doctor. She asks if it's still hungry, offering it the most important leaf in [[human]] history, which is full of her mother's lost life, a whole future that never happened. The entity feeds on the infinite possibilities represented by the leaf. The Doctor, reviving, declares that he must be full, as infinity is too much, even for his appetite. The star recedes again, this time seemingly asleep for good.
 
The Doctor returns Clara to [[30 Oak Street|her home]]. She realises that she'd seen him at her mother's grave. He confesses that she reminds him of someone he knew, someone who died. Clara tells the Doctor that he shouldn't see her as a replacement for his old friend, but to treat her as herself; he agrees. He gives her back her mother's ring, saying the people that she had saved wanted her to have it back. Clara leaves the TARDIS for home. The moment she does, the Doctor gives a grim look after her.


== Cast ==
== Cast ==
* [[Eleventh Doctor|The Doctor]] - [[Matt Smith]]
* [[Eleventh Doctor|The Doctor]] - [[Matt Smith]]
* [[Clara Oswin Oswald|Clara Oswald]] - [[Jenna-Louise Coleman]]
* [[Clara Oswald|Clara]] - [[Jenna-Louise Coleman]]
* [[Dave Oswald|Dave]] - [[Michael Dixon]]
* [[Dave Oswald|Dave]] - [[Michael Dixon]]
* [[Ellie Oswald|Ellie]] - [[Nicola Sian]]
* [[Ellie Oswald|Ellie]] - [[Nicola Sian]]
* [[Merry Galel|Merry]] - [[Emilia Jones]]
* [[Merry Gejelh|Merry]] - [[Emilia Jones]]
* [[The Chorister (The Rings of Akhaten)|The Chorister]] - [[Chris Anderson]]
* [[Rezh Baphix|The Chorister]] - [[Chris Anderson]]
* [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|The Mummy]] - [[Aidan Cook]]
* [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|The Mummy]] - [[Aidan Cook]]
* [[Dor'een]] - [[Karl Greenwood]]
* [[Dor'een]] - [[Karl Greenwood]]


== References ==
=== Uncredited cast ===
* [[Vigil]] - [[Jon Davey]], [[Claudio Laurini]], [[Matthew Doman]]<ref>http://guide.doctorwhonews.net/role.php?code=4314&detail=listing&pg=dwm</ref>
* Millennium Alien - [[Mickey Lewis]]<ref>http://guide.doctorwhonews.net/person.php?code=5312&detail=listing&pg=rnd</ref>
 
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== Worldbuilding ==
=== Alien species ===
=== Alien species ===
* At the [[market]], the Doctor recognizes some alien species: [[Pan-babylonian]]s, a [[Lugal-Irra-Kush]], [[Lucanian]]s, a [[Hooloovoo]], [[Qom VoTivig]], a [[Terraberserker]] of the [[Kodonion Belt]] and an [[Ultramancer]].
* At the market, the Doctor recognises some alien species: [[Pan-Babylonian]]s, a [[Lugaleracush]], [[Lucanian]]s, a [[Eukanian]], a [[Hooloovoo]], a [[Terraberserker]] of the [[Cadonian Belt]], an [[Ultramancer]] and a [[Citizen from the City State of Binding Light]] as well as a white skinned variant of the [[Hop Pyleen]] brothers species. An [[Energy-based species (The Rings of Akhaten)|energy-based species]], a [[Tentacled species (The Rings of Akhaten)|tentacled species]] and a [[Four-eyed species (The Rings of Akhaten)|four-eyed species]] are also present.
* One of the alien species at the [[market]] appears to be related to the [[Hoix]]; it also has a bubbling breathing contraption like a [[Hath]] and fronds like an [[Ood]].
** There is also [[Ice Warrior (The Rings of Akhaten)|an Ice Warrior]] present without its [[survival armour|armour]], but the Doctor doesn't notice it.


=== Food ===
=== Food ===
* Clara tries out an "[[Exotic fruit (The Rings of Akhaten)|exotic fruit of some description]]", and does not like it. The Doctor also eats one.
* Clara tries out an "[[Exotic fruit (The Rings of Akhaten)|exotic fruit of some description]]", and does not like it. The Doctor also eats one.
* The Doctor raves about the quality of [[scone]]s from the [[Lake District]].


=== Cultural references from the real world ===
=== Cultural references from the real world ===
* The Doctor references {{w|The Walrus and The Carpenter}} by Lewis Carroll.
* The Doctor references "[[The Walrus and the Carpenter]]".
* The Doctor says, "Home again, home again, jiggedy jig" when they return home, which is part of a famous nursery rhyme known as "{{w|To market, to market}}". It's also spoken repeatedly by two of J.F. Sebastian's replicant toys in the acclaimed sci-fi film {{w|Blade Runner}}.
* The Doctor reads ''[[The Beano Summer Special 1981]]'' while observing Clara's parents. Due to popular demand, DC Thompson, the publishers of ''[[The Beano]]'' issued a special reprint shortly after the episode aired.
* [[Akhenaten|Akh-''en''-aten]] was an Egyptian pharaoh (and husband of [[Nefertiti]]) whose name means "incarnation of the sun god".
 
* The Hooloovoo is a species in {{w|Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy}}.
=== The Doctor ===
* The Doctor slides under a closing door, and then reaches for his sonic screwdriver, which he'd dropped on the other side, very much like the trademark move of [[Indiana Jones]].
* The Doctor tells Clara that the one thing she needs to know about travelling with him, "apart from [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the blue box]] and [[Binary vascular system|the two hearts]]", is that they never walk away.
* Clara mentions the Doctor being [[The Doctor's age|1,000 years old]].


=== Individuals ===
=== Individuals ===
* Clara tells [[Merry]] that she hated [[history]].
* The Old God is also referred to as "Grandfather".


=== The Doctor ===
* The Doctor mentions that he has come to the Festival of Offerings once before with his [[Susan Foreman|granddaughter]].
* The [[Eleventh Doctor]] tells Clara that he's been to [[Akhaten]] with [[Susan Foreman|his granddaughter]] before.
 
* The Doctor tells Clara that the one thing she needs to know about him, "aside from [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the blue box]] and [[Binary vascular system|the two hearts]]", is that he doesn't walk away. He later clarifies that, if he's holding onto something precious he will run away until out of the shadow of danger.
=== Events ===
* Clara mentions the Doctor being [[The Doctor's age|1,000 years old]].
 
* The Doctor indicates that his [[sonic screwdriver]] is the only thing he has on him that has sentimental value. He doesn't want to give it up as currency as it "comes in handy".
* The Doctor mentions the [[Last Great Time War|Time War]] during his speech to Ahkaten.
 
=== Influences ===
 
* ''[[Star Wars (franchise)|Star Wars]] -'' Tiaanamaat was based on the Mos Eisley Cantina from ''[[Star Wars (film)|A New Hope]],'' while the space mopeds were inspired by the speeder bikes from ''[[Return of the Jedi]],'' though [[Neil Cross]] felt that they had more in common with ''[[Flash Gordon]].''
* The lines "I've seen things you wouldn't believe" and "Home again, jiggity-jig" are from ''[[Blade Runner]].''
* The living planet was an homage to both the unknowable alien gods depicted in the stories of [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/H._P._Lovecraft HP Lovecraft], and the anthropomorphised moon in ''[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Trip_to_the_Moon A Trip to the Moon].''


== Story notes ==
== Story notes ==
* Early on, Neil Cross' script (a first draft of which was completed in early October) bore the functional title ''Alien Planet''. This reflected [[Neil Cross]]' process of first conceiving the sentient planet Akhaten with its two concentric ring systems (where the pyramid-like Apex Temple lay in the inner ring, and the market asteroid of Tiaanamaat lay in the outer), and developing its people and their religion, before building the plot around this setting.
* Unlike the previous episodes of Series 7, this episode does not introduce a new variation of the Doctor Who logo.
* Unlike the previous episodes of Series 7, this episode does not introduce a new variation of the Doctor Who logo.
* This the first episode since her [[The Angels Take Manhattan (TV story)|departure]] that does not have [[Amy Pond]] inadvertently affecting the plot or story. The word 'Pond' was what got the Doctor to come out of retirement in [[TV]]: ''[[The Snowmen (TV story)|The Snowmen]]'' and an image on the cover of the book she wrote [[Summer Falls]], became a manifestation for a [[Spoonhead]] in [[TV]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John (TV story)|The Bells of Saint John]]''
* This is the first regular television story featuring no significant [[Human]] characters or link to [[Earth]] other than the companion(s) since either [[TV]]: ''[[The Girl Who Waited (TV story)|The Girl Who Waited]]'' or [[TV]]: ''[[Asylum of the Daleks (TV story)|Asylum of the Daleks]]'', depending on whether converted [[Dalek puppet]]s are considered "human", and the first of such with an actually significantly-sized guest cast since either [[TV]]: ''[[Planet of Fire (TV story)|Planet of Fire]]'' or [[TV]]: ''[[Dragonfire (TV story)|Dragonfire]]'', the latter featuring a supporting cast largely of [[Humanoid]]s of unidentified species.
* This is the first mention of Susan in the revived TV series.
* This is the first episode since her [[The Angels Take Manhattan (TV story)|departure]] that does not have [[Amy Pond]] referenced and inadvertently affecting the plot or story. The word "Pond" was what got the Doctor to come out of [[retirement]] in the television story ''[[The Snowmen (TV story)|The Snowmen]]'' and an image on the cover of the book she wrote, [[Summer Falls]], became a manifestation for a [[Spoonhead]] in the television story ''[[The Bells of Saint John (TV story)|The Bells of Saint John]]''
* The basic plot has commonality with the ''[[Doctor Who Magazine]]'' comic story, ''[[Thinktwice (comic story)|Thinktwice]]''. As in this story, the [[Tenth Doctor]] in ''Thinktwice'' fights an enemy that takes memories, and he proposes to defeat that enemy, the [[Memeovax]], by "overloading it" with his own memories.
* This story features the debut of the [[incidental music]] track "Infinite Potential", a melancholy version of "The Long Song". It was later reused with the theme "Trenzalore" and a small sampling of "The Sad Man in a Box" to frame the Eleventh Doctor's [[regeneration]] scene in the television story ''[[The Time of the Doctor (TV story)|The Time of the Doctor]]'', later released as part of a reprise included in [[Doctor Who - The Day of the Doctor and The Time of the Doctor (soundtrack)|the official soundtrack release for the Series 7 specials]].
* Ellie Oswald is shown to have died on March 5, 2005, the same date as the events of the television story ''[[Rose (TV story)|Rose]]''.
* The scene where pilgrims join [[Merry Gejelh]] in singing was intended to be similar to the scene from the classic movie ''[[Casablanca (film)|Casablanca]]'' where people join in singing of "La Marseillaise" to drown out a [[Nazi]] song.<ref>[[DWMSE 37]]</ref>
* This episode was ranked as ''[[Doctor Who Magazine]]'' readers' least favourite [[Eleventh Doctor]] story in their 50th anniversary poll of [[2014]]. In [[2023]], it was replaced by ''[[The Doctor, the Widow and the Wardrobe (TV story)|The Doctor, the Widow and the Wardrobe]]''. ([[DWM 593]])
* [[Neil Cross]] had already written ''[[Hide (TV story)|Hide]]'' and was initially doubtful that he had the time to accommodate write another script, but he was finally won over when he learned of the production team's ambition for the story. As such, his new script would actually air first.
* [[Marcus Wilson]] suggested the space mopeds.
* The concept behind having the episode based around an alien planet occurred to [[Steven Moffat]], [[Caroline Skinner]], and [[Marcus Wilson]] when realising they had done big location pieces in the first half of the season with [[A Town Called Mercy|''A Town Called Mercy'']] and [[The Angels Take Manhattan|''The Angels Take Manhattan'']], but had none for the second half. They decided to do a story set in "a world created in our studios to make you really feel you're out there", rather than having the Doctor "promise unearthly wonders to his companions, and then get them trapped in an underground tunnel". As such, the episode was designed to allow the Doctor to actually show his new companion the wonders he had promised.
* The episode replaced a slot that was going to be a script by [[Chris Chibnall]], but he was unable to write it due to his commitment to ''[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Broadchurch Broadchurch].''
* [[Jenna-Louise Coleman]] named this one of her favourites episodes of the second half of the seventh series, as it was the first adventure for Clara which allowed the audience to watch the story "[begin] again".
* The episode originally had a different pre-credits sequence, which consisted of a long scene in the kitchen of the Maitland house in which Clara informs the Doctor she cannot come and travel with the Doctor because she has responsibilities to her job, and [[Artie Maitland]] asks if the Doctor is her boyfriend. [[Neil Cross]]' intent was to juxtapose this "mundane" scene with the vast scale of the planet. However, [[Steven Moffat]] thought that at the time in the series the Doctor should be investigating Clara through her parents and Cross revised to include the leaf, an idea Moffat approved of.
* The living planet was originally referred to as Akhet, a name which survived in references to the Sun Singers of Akhet.
* The episode comprised Block Nine of season seven.
* This was the second of four episodes produced by [[Denise Paul]], while [[Marcus Wilson]] turned his attention to ''[[The Day of the Doctor (TV story)|The Day of the Doctor]]''; he would instead be credited as series producer.
* The production team aimed to show "the best alien planet" in the show.
* The flashbacks were the first material to be filmed.
* The shot of the TARDIS materialising at the Maitland residence was filmed on Beatty Avenue in Cardiff during the making of ''[[The Name of the Doctor (TV story)|The Name of the Doctor]].''
* Originally the resolution was to be the Doctor defeating the planet with his speech, which [[Neil Cross]] likened to "facing down one of [[H. P. Lovecraft|Lovecraft]]'s Old Gods: an alien so alien that it's practically a supernatural being." [[Steven Moffat]] pointed out that the Doctor had given similar speeches before and was more interested in Clara saving the day. After thinking about it for a while, Cross realised he could incorporate the leaf into the solution.
* According to [[Matt Smith]], there were "between 50 and 60 prosthetic aliens" in a scene set in an alien market.
* The Doctor features minimally in the first act because [[Matt Smith]] was busy filming pick-ups or reshoots for [[Nightmare in Silver|''Nightmare in Silver'']].
* [[Millennium FX]]'s [[Neill Gorton]] remarked that he had "always wanted to do a scene like the ''[[Star Wars (film)|Star Wars]]'' cantina" and had worked on different moulds in his spare time in case they could be used in the future, as making thirty different aliens at one time would be out of the budget.
* Most of the aliens in the bazaar are made of bits of props left over from previous aliens or ones from other BBC shows.
 
=== Rumours ===
* The Doctor would [[regenerate]] or give away his regenerations. ''This turned out to be false. The golden light that the Doctor was connected with was his memories, not regeneration energy.''
* Clara's mother was killed in the Auton attack shown in ''TV'': ''[[Rose (TV story)|Rose]]''. ''This was neither proven nor disproven.''
* Whilst the Doctor is watching Clara at her mother's grave, a [[Time Beetle]] can be seen on the tree. ''It is simply the way that the vines and ivy intertwine with each other that creates this illusion.''


=== Ratings ===
=== Ratings ===
The episode was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on [[BBC One]] on 6 April 2013. Overnight ratings showed that it was watched by 5.5 million viewers live, a 28.8% audience share. When time-shifted viewers were factored in, the final rating rose to 7.45 million, making it the sixth most-watched programme of the week on BBC One.<ref>[http://guide.doctorwhonews.net/info.php?detail=ratings&type=date Doctor Who Ratings - UK final]</ref> In addition, ''The Rings of Akhaten'' received over two million requests on the online [[BBC iPlayer]] in April, coming in first for the month on the service. The episode also received an [[Appreciation Index]] of 84.


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* The crack on the glass case containing the mummy disappears and reappears between shots.
* The crack on the glass case containing the mummy disappears and reappears between shots.
* The leaf that Clara has in this episode appears to be shaped differently, possibly even having come from a different type of [[Tree|tree]] than the leaf shown in the previous episode.
* When Clara tastes the exotic fruit, it is rather obvious that Jenna Louise-Coleman is simply touching the prop to her mouth, not actually eating it.
* Just before the wipe from the scene, in which Clara tells the Doctor to bring her somewhere awesome, to the scene where the Doctor brings Clara to the Rings of Akhaten, Matt Smith accidentally tears open a control panel.
* Just before Clara gets onto the moped to rescue the Doctor, and just after the flashback in which the Doctor says, "We don't walk away," the scene cuts to the Doctor doubling over in pain. All though this does not appear in the closed captioning, the Doctor can be heard mumbling, "What more can you want?" The music and sound effects cover this up, and it appears that the producers may have tried to erase this dialogue in post-production. The volume must be turned on extremely high in order to hear this remark.
* There are numerous instances in the episode where extras dressed as aliens had little or no make-up around the eyes, making the masks obviously look like masks.
* When the Vigil throw Clara into the wall, the wall moves when her back collides with it.


== Continuity ==
== Continuity ==
* The [[Eleventh Doctor]] wears [[Amy Pond|Amy]]'s reading [[glasses]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Angels Take Manhattan]]'', ''[[The Snowmen]]'', ''[[The Bells of Saint John]]'')
* The [[Eleventh Doctor]] wears [[Amy Pond|Amy]]'s reading [[glasses]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Angels Take Manhattan (TV story)|The Angels Take Manhattan]]'', ''[[The Snowmen (TV story)|The Snowmen]]'', ''[[The Bells of Saint John (TV story)|The Bells of Saint John]]'')
* Clara's [[book]], ''[[101 Places to See]]'', used to belong to [[Ellie Oswald|her mother]]. ([[WC]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel (webcast)|The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel]]'', [[TV]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John]]'')
* Clara's [[book]], ''[[101 Places to See]]'', used to belong to [[Ellie Oswald|her mother]]. ([[WC]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel (webcast)|The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel]]'', [[TV]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John (TV story)|The Bells of Saint John]]'')
*The Doctor has faced a sentient star before, although he implied that he'd never faced one so big. ([[TV]]: ''[[42 (TV story)|42]]'')
* The Doctor has faced a sentient celestial body before, although he implied that he'd never faced one so big. ([[TV]]: ''[[42 (TV story)|42]]'')
* The Doctor mentions the [[Last Great Time War]] and the destruction of the Time Lords. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of Time (TV story)|The End of Time]]'')
* The Doctor mentions the [[Last Great Time War]] and the destruction of the Time Lords. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of Time (TV story)|The End of Time]]'')
* The Doctor mentions bringing [[Susan Foreman|his granddaughter]] to Akhaten at some point in time, though she is not mentioned by name. This is the first explicit mention of Susan Foreman in the revived series. ([[TV]]: ''[[An Unearthly Child (TV story)|An Unearthly Child]]'')
* The Doctor mentions bringing "his granddaughter" to Akhaten at some point in time. Other accounts show that the [[First Doctor]] travelled, at various points, with his granddaughters [[Susan Foreman]] ([[TV]]: ''[[An Unearthly Child (TV story)|An Unearthly Child]]'') and [[Gillian Who]] ([[COMIC]]: ''[[The Klepton Parasites (comic story)|The Klepton Parasites]]'') as [[companion]]s.
* Clara tries to open the TARDIS without a key. When it won't open, she says that the TARDIS doesn't seem to like her, an issue that former companions [[Jack Harkness]] and [[Charlotte Pollard]] had. ([[TV]]: ''[[Utopia (TV story)|Utopia]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Condemned]]'')  
* Clara tries to open the TARDIS without a key. When it won't open, she says that the TARDIS doesn't seem to like her, an issue that former companions [[Jack Harkness]] and [[Charlotte Pollard]] had. ([[TV]]: ''[[Utopia (TV story)|Utopia]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Condemned (audio story)|The Condemned]]'')
* The Doctor talks about seeing the beginning of time, ([[TV]]: ''[[Castrovalva (TV story)|Castrovalva]]'') living to see time run out, ([[TV]]: ''[[Utopia (TV story)|Utopia]]'', ''[[The Big Bang (TV story)|The Big Bang]]'') and being in a dimension where the laws of physics were devised by a madman. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Celestial Toymaker (TV story)|The Celestial Toymaker]]'', ''[[The Mind Robber (TV story)|The Mind Robber]]'', ''[[The Three Doctors (TV story)|The Three Doctors]]'') He also mentions knowing [[The Question|knowledge that must never be told]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Wedding of River Song (TV story)|The Wedding of River Song]]'')
* The Doctor mentions seeing the birth of the universe, ([[TV]]: ''[[Castrovalva (TV story)|Castrovalva]]'') living to see time run out, ([[TV]]: ''[[Utopia (TV story)|Utopia]]'', ''[[The Big Bang (TV story)|The Big Bang]]'') seeing universes freeze ([[TV]]: ''[[The Armageddon Factor (TV story)|The Armageddon Factor]]'') and creations burn, ([[TV]]: ''[[Inferno (TV story)|Inferno]]'') and being in universes where the laws of physics were devised by a madman. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Celestial Toymaker (TV story)|The Celestial Toymaker]]'', ''[[The Mind Robber (TV story)|The Mind Robber]]'', ''[[The Three Doctors (TV story)|The Three Doctors]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[Gods and Monsters (audio story)|Gods and Monsters]]'', ''[[The Next Life (audio story)|The Next Life]]'') He also mentions knowing [[War Doctor|secrets that must never be told]] ([[TV]]: ''[[The Name of the Doctor (TV story)|The Name of the Doctor]]'') and [[The Question|knowledge that must never be spoken]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Silver Nemesis (TV story)|Silver Nemesis]]'', ''[[The Wedding of River Song (TV story)|The Wedding of River Song]]'')
* [[Ambassadors from the City State of Binding Light|A native of the City State of Binding Light]] is seen among the crowd at the [[Festival of Offerings]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of the World (TV story)|The End of the World]]'')
* [[Ambassadors from the City State of Binding Light|A native of the City State of Binding Light]] is seen among the crowd at the [[Festival of Offerings]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of the World (TV story)|The End of the World]]'')
* Clara jokingly refers to the [[the Doctor's sonic screwdriver|sonic screwdriver]] as a "spanner". [[Martha Jones]] previously asked the [[Tenth Doctor]] whether he had a "[[laser spanner]]", and he claimed it had been stolen from him by [[Emmeline Pankhurst]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Smith and Jones (TV story)|Smith and Jones]])''.
* Clara mentions having gotten lost in [[Blackpool]] beach in her youth. A later statement by Clara indicates that she is originally from Blackpool. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Caretaker (TV story)|The Caretaker]]'')


== Home video releases ==
== Home video releases ==
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===DVD & Blu-ray releases===
 
* ''The Rings of Akhaten'' was released on DVD and Blu-ray as part of Doctor Who Series 7 Part Two in region 1/A on [[28 May (releases)|28 May]] [[2013 (releases)|2013]], region 2/B on [[27 May (releases)|27 May]] 2013, and region 4/B on [[22 May (releases)|22 May]] 2013.
* Also, this episode was released as part of the Complete Seventh Series boxset on DVD and Blu-ray in region 1/A on [[24 September (releases)|24 September]] [[2013 (releases)|2013]], in region 2/B on [[28 October (releases)|28 October]] 2013 and in region 4/B on [[30 October (releases)|30 October]] 2013.
 
=== Digital releases ===
* This story is available for streaming via Amazon Prime Video.
* It can also be purchased on iTunes and Amazon Instant Video. The digital Series 7 boxset also features prequel episodes and ''[[Pond Life (webcast)|Pond Life]]''.
* In 2015, it was released by BBC Worldwide on BitTorrent and iTunes, in ''A Decade of the Doctor'' bundle to celebrate the 10th anniversary of the new series. It included introductions by [[Peter Capaldi]], ''Earth Conquest: The World Tour'' and an episode guide.
* In the United Kingdom, this story is available on [[BBC iPlayer]].


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The Rings of Akhaten was the seventh episode of series seven of Doctor Who.

In it, the Eleventh Doctor's new companion, Clara, took her first trip in the TARDIS to an alien planet. Clara's mother, Ellie Oswald, previously seen in The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel, was also shown to have passed away eight years before Clara met the Doctor properly.

This marks the first time that the TARDIS translation circuit hasn't worked properly for the Doctor's companion on their first trip to a place where their native language isn't spoken; the Doctor could understand Dor'een perfectly, but all Clara could hear was aggressive barking. However, Clara could understand Merry's humanoid species and when everyone sang. This could have been one of the TARDIS's signs that it didn't like Clara (for a very good reason), along with refusing to open the door for her; not being able to understand aliens would scare Clara into never staying on as a companion.

This marks the first time the Doctor has extensively researched someone he chose to take on as his companion. Although he normally would just accept others without any such action, Clara warranted such investigation because of the other versions of her that the Doctor had previously met.

The Impossible Girl arc continued in this episode, with the Doctor not being able to find any answers as to why there are multiple Claras throughout history. So far, it appears to have been nothing more than a coincidence. However, the Doctor remains suspicious as to whether Clara is some kind of trick or trap meant to ensnare him. It wouldn't be until two years later in Hell Bent that the reason Clara has been a part of the Doctor's life was revealed.

Synopsis[[edit] | [edit source]]

Clara Oswald wants to see something awesome, so the Eleventh Doctor whisks her off to the inhabited rings of the planet Akhaten, where the Festival of Offerings is in full swing. Clara meets the young Queen of Years as the pilgrims and natives ready for the ceremony. But something is stirring in the pyramid, and a sacrifice will be demanded.

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The wind blows autumn leaves and a wooden gate closes. One large, reddish-orange leaf rattles on the tree. A young man dressed in a suit, fumbles with an unfolded map as he walks down a pavement. The Doctor peers out from behind a copy of The Beano Summer Special 1981. The young man looks around in confusion when suddenly a leaf falls from the tree into his face. He stumbles into the street and the path of an oncoming car, but is pulled aside by a young woman. She asks if he is all right and he smiles.

Ellie first meets Clara's father.

Sometime later, the two are sharing an umbrella and stumble up to a doorway in laughter. He pulls out the leaf and she asks why he kept it. He explains that "this precise leaf had to grow in that precise way, in that precise place, so that precise wind could tear it from that precise branch, and make it fly into this precise face at that exact moment. And if just one of those tiny little things had never happened, I'd never have met you. Which makes this the most important leaf in human history." They kiss; the Doctor frowns and walks away in the rain.

A montage shows Dave and Ellie raising their newborn daughter Clara. Dave comes to visit Clara in the nursery while Ellie is rocking her. A few years later, Ellie shows toddler Clara her book, 101 Places to See; the little girl enthusiastically points to a location in the book.

The Doctor is next seen getting hit in the face by a football and falls down. He pops up with his hands in a defensive gesture as Ellie asks if he's all right. Among other things, he says that's he's possibly a touch embarrassed and seriously asks if that's dangerous. Laughing, Ellie tells him that it's not. Dave brings primary school-aged Clara over and she's introduced. Dave laughs that Clara is imitating a football player. The Doctor gives a warm smile and greeting to the little girl.

A teenage Clara, holding her mother's book, stands with her father in mourning over the gravestone for "Ellie Oswald, beloved wife and mother, born 11 September 1960, died 5 March 2005." Hiding behind a tree, the Doctor watches as neither Oswald can find the words to comfort each other. He returns to the TARDIS, which shows an image of Clara graduating high school on the monitor; he's been investigating her past to make sure she's just a human girl. Information on Oswin, Victorian Clara and the present day version appear rapidly on the screen, much to his increasing disbelief. Frustrated, he pushes the screen away and declares, "She's not possible."

2013. Clara is sitting on the stairway outside her home with her book; she seems impatient, waiting for the Doctor to arrive. She hears the TARDIS land, the door open, and she smiles and jumps up as the doorbell rings.

In the TARDIS console room, she asks about the nature of time ("not made of strawberries"), and if the TARDIS can go anywhere ("within reason"). The Doctor asks her where she wants to go and see. Clara freezes, saying she doesn't know; it's like forgetting what your favourite book when someone asks you. The Doctor patiently waits by the controls, as Clara thinks to herself about where to go. She smiles and says she wants to see "something awesome". The Doctor complies and begins working at the controls.

{{video|Welcome to The Rings of Akhaten - Doctor Who The Rings of Akhaten preview - Series 7 2013 - BBC One|thumb|left|"Welcome to the Rings of Akhaten."]]The Doctor walks her out of the TARDIS, with her eyes closed, into the light of an alien sun. He bids her open her eyes so he can welcome her to the Rings of Akhaten. A golden pyramid comes into view. It is the Pyramid of the Rings of Akhaten, a holy site for the Sun-singers of Akhet. This is a system of seven worlds, orbiting the same star, and they believe that all life in the universe originated on Akhaten. Clara asks if it's true; the Doctor shrugs off the questions, saying that it's a nice story they believe.

Clara asks to go see it, and the Doctor complies parking the TARDIS in an alien market.

The Doctor points out species in the market.

The Doctor says that most of the people around are local species, and points out some: some Pan-Babylonians, a Lugalirakush, some Eukanians, a Hooloovoo and an Ultramanta. He does a ritual greeting with a Terraberserker of the Cadonian Belt, mentioning that they're not common. He says he forgot how much he liked it there — he'd been there a long time ago with his granddaughter. Clara's a bit shocked at this confession, but the Doctor's moving fast. She runs after him and he presents her with a glowing blue fruit. She takes a bite as he scans it with his screwdriver. She shakes her head at the taste.

The place is crowded because of the Festival of Offerings, and a creature comes up to Clara, barking and growling at her. The Doctor returns, barking himself to communicate, and introduces Dor'een to Clara. Dor'een had been asking if they want to rent a moped. Clara asks what it costs and the Doctor explains that they don't use money here. They use objects of sentimental value as currency; "Psychometry. Objects psychically imprinted with their history." She dislikes the idea, thinking it's terrible to have to give up something important to you in trade. The Doctor says it's better than bits of paper, so she says that he should pay, as someone who's a thousand years old should have something that he cares about. The Doctor pulls out his sonic screwdriver, then shakes his head and puts it back.

Dor'een in the market.

Clara turns her back for a moment, finding that the Doctor has walked off again. She goes looking for him. A little girl, wearing crimson robes, bumps into her and runs off. Shortly afterwards, two men wearing similar robes, presumably monks of the religious order of that system, ask Clara if she'd seen the Queen of Years. Clara is confused, asking who they mean; seeing that she has no clue, they search on.

Worried about the girl, Clara heads for where she ran. This leads her to a messy area filled with junk. The girl runs, and Clara slowly follows. They startle each other and laugh. The girl says she's hiding and is confused and sceptical that Clara doesn't know her. The girl says she needs help to hide, and Clara knows the perfect box. Three figures wearing black uniforms with brass buttons and facial masks appear and start whispering, calling out for the girl. Clara takes the little girl to the TARDIS and tries to open the doors, but they are locked. She rattles the doors a bit, then states that the blue box just doesn't like her. Clara gets a little angry, but she forgets it when the little girl ducks behind the TARDIS. She tells Clara that her name is Merry Galel, and she's the Queen of Years. She was chosen to become this as a baby when the previous Queen died. She knows every story, poem, legend, and song of their culture. She's scared because she has to sing a special song to their god to keep him from waking.

Clara tells Merry that everyone's scared when they're little. She had been scared of being lost until she'd gotten lost once. Her mum found her and took her home, and told her that no matter how lost she was, her mum would always find her. Afterwards, Clara was afraid many times, but never of being lost. Merry believes Clara when she tells her she'll get the song right, and Clara takes her back to the men in red robes who were looking for her. The Doctor comes up, eating the glowing blue fruit. He's curious as to what she's been up to, to which Clara tells him that she's been blending in.

In a room in the pyramid, a man in red robes sings to a mummy. He switches out with the Chorister.

Merry continues the Long Song.

Clara and the Doctor arrive to view a ceremony. The Doctor shushes Clara when she tries to ask if they're supposed to be there. There is some grumbling, then silence as Merry looks at Clara before she begins to sing a duet with the man in the pyramid. The Doctor reads the program and tells Clara that they're signing the Long Song, a lullaby to keep the Old God, or Grandfather, asleep. There has been a Chorister singing this endless song for generations. Others in the audience hold up offerings, gifts of sentimental value, to feed the Old God. The viewers, including the Doctor, join in the song.

The Chorister in the pyramid falters, and they all stop singing, looking around in confusion. The Chorister raises his hood and continues. The ground shakes at the pyramid and in the viewing room, and a golden energy seizes Merry and starts moving her towards the pyramid. She screams and Clara asks if anyone is going to help her. She follows the Doctor, who is already leaving, saying he can't just walk away because Clara talked Merry into doing this. He replies; "Listen, there is one thing you need to know about travelling with me. Well, one thing, apart from the blue box and the two hearts. We don't walk away."

He walks up to Dor'een, barking, then pats his pockets and looks back to Clara. He tells her he needs something. She's confused, saying that he must have something himself. He pulls out the screwdriver, saying; "I don't want to give it away because it comes in handy." She looks down and quietly takes her mother's ring from her hand and hands it over. They take the moped and fly it out to the glowing ball carrying Merry. Clara almost takes her hand, but the little girl flies into the pyramid.

Merry screams.

Clara and the Doctor land at a doorway protected by a frequency-modulated acoustic lock. He says that he really can't open it, as it changes too quickly, but he'll try anyway. He bizarrely attempts to knock the door down, only succeeding in hurt his shoulder in the attempt; even a Time Lord isn't strong enough to knock down a stone door. Inside, the Chorister continues to sing. Merry walks closer, saying that she doesn't know what to do. The mummy's eyes glow red and she screams.

The Doctor manages to open the door, but it's very difficult and heavy to hold up. As Merry won't leave, the Doctor is unable to do anything other than hold the door up. Merry won't leave, as she believes that it is her fault the Old God is waking, and she doesn't believe Clara any more because Clara was wrong. Looking at the Old God, Clara says "He is ugly, but I don't think he's big enough." Merry tells Clara it doesn't feed on flesh, but souls. She telekinetically pins Clara to the glass around the Old God, and then says that he doesn't want Clara, he wants her, but if the others don't leave the God will eat them too.

Chorister Rezh Baphix declares the Long Song has ended with him.

The Doctor says they're never going to leave, then hums a bar and lets go of the door. Clara asks if they've just been locked in with the soul-eating monster, and the Doctor says yes. Clara questions if the Doctor can get them out preferably before their souls are eaten, to which he says is possible. Her attention is then drawn to the Chorister, who is still singing; she asks the Doctor why he's even bothering. The Doctor approaches the man, explaining he's attempting to keep the Old God from waking up. With a smirk, the Doctor explains that there is nothing that can be done, the Old God is waking and the best option is to run. The Chorister stops and declares that the Long Song has ended with him. He presses a button on his wristband and teleports away.

The Doctor states that the song is over and aims his sonic screwdriver at the glass case. The mummy awakens with a mighty roar, frightening Clara, whose back is to it; the Doctor passes out the mummy's attempts to break out as him having a stretch. The Doctor tells Merry that they didn't wake him; he woke because it was time to wake up. Merry is as a sacrifice for the monster, because if she's going to do this voluntarily she should know why. Every time the Old God threatens to waken, the Queen of Years is offered as a sacrifice to put him back sleep; it feeds on her story. Clara reminds the Doctor that Merry said it ate souls. The Doctor tells her "Souls are made up of stories. People we lost. People we found against all odds." To calm Merry, the Doctor tells her a story she doesn't know; she is unique in the universe and there won't be another person like her. The Old God is a 'vampire"; it'll eat her soul, but that doesn't make it a god. If Merry doesn't offer herself, everything will be fine.

The Vigil try forcing Merry's sacrifice.

Merry lets Clara go, just in time for Clara to see that the Old God has started cracking the case. She sneers at the Doctor for downplaying the danger. When they attempt to leave, the temple shakes. Merry explains that if the Queen of Years refuses to be fed on, the Vigil are to feed her to the Old God. The Vigil appear. They knock the Doctor and Clara unconscious and lead her to the mummy. Clara rouses first and gets the screwdriver to the Doctor. He holds off the Vigil with the sonic. Clara asks Merry if she knows a secret way out of the pyramid. Merry recalls a secret song and sings it, opening another door. They run, but Clara goes back for the Doctor. He holds back the Vigil again as the mummy breaks the glass, and a beam of light shoots from him into the planet. The Vigil disappear and the Mummy appears to die.

The Doctor explains that they're gone because Grandfather is awake and they're no longer needed. He declares that he's made a tactical mistake. He thought the Old God and Grandfather were the same thing, the Mummy, but "it was just Grandfather's alarm clock". Akhaten itself is the Old God; an evil grinning face appears on the star. Merry states Akhaten will eat everyone in the system and then continue across the stars. Clara and the Doctor talk about going somewhere else but she knows he's going to stay to fight it. He sends Clara off to save Merry and turns to confront the star. Clara returns Merry to the viewing platform. Merry wants to help, so she stands and begins singing a new song. Their resolve to fight back against him shocks Akhaten.

The Doctor smiles and begins to tell a story to Akhaten, a story about the people singing to him, and about the things that the Doctor is and knows. Akhaten sends tendrils of energy out of its mouth, which pierce the Doctor and begin sucking out his experiences. "I walked away from the Last Great Time War. I marked the passing of the Time Lords. I saw the birth of the Universe and I watched as time ran out. Moment by moment until nothing remained, no time, no space, just me! I walked in universes where the laws of physics were devised by the mind of a mad man! And I watched universes freeze and creations burn! I have seen things you wouldn't believe! I have lost things you will never understand! And I know things, secrets that must never be told, knowledge that must never be spoken! Knowledge that will make parasite Gods blaze! SO COME ON THEN! TAKE IT! TAKE IT ALL, BABY! HAVE IT! YOU HAVE IT ALL!" the Doctor roars. The Doctor slumps to the ground, hurt and exhausted from having his precious memories fed on. Akhaten begins going back to sleep.

However, much to the Doctor's horror, Akhaten isn't full; it's waking back up. Clara remembers her mother's words and heads back to the Doctor. She asks if it's still hungry, offering it the most important leaf in human history, which is full of her mother's lost life, a whole future that never happened. The entity feeds on the infinite possibilities represented by the leaf. The Doctor, reviving, declares that he must be full, as infinity is too much, even for his appetite. The star recedes again, this time seemingly asleep for good.

The Doctor returns Clara to her home. She realises that she'd seen him at her mother's grave. He confesses that she reminds him of someone he knew, someone who died. Clara tells the Doctor that he shouldn't see her as a replacement for his old friend, but to treat her as herself; he agrees. He gives her back her mother's ring, saying the people that she had saved wanted her to have it back. Clara leaves the TARDIS for home. The moment she does, the Doctor gives a grim look after her.

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  • The Doctor tells Clara that the one thing she needs to know about travelling with him, "apart from the blue box and the two hearts", is that they never walk away.
  • Clara mentions the Doctor being 1,000 years old.

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  • The Doctor mentions that he has come to the Festival of Offerings once before with his granddaughter.

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  • The Doctor mentions the Time War during his speech to Ahkaten.

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  • Early on, Neil Cross' script (a first draft of which was completed in early October) bore the functional title Alien Planet. This reflected Neil Cross' process of first conceiving the sentient planet Akhaten with its two concentric ring systems (where the pyramid-like Apex Temple lay in the inner ring, and the market asteroid of Tiaanamaat lay in the outer), and developing its people and their religion, before building the plot around this setting.
  • Unlike the previous episodes of Series 7, this episode does not introduce a new variation of the Doctor Who logo.
  • This is the first regular television story featuring no significant Human characters or link to Earth other than the companion(s) since either TV: The Girl Who Waited or TV: Asylum of the Daleks, depending on whether converted Dalek puppets are considered "human", and the first of such with an actually significantly-sized guest cast since either TV: Planet of Fire or TV: Dragonfire, the latter featuring a supporting cast largely of Humanoids of unidentified species.
  • This is the first episode since her departure that does not have Amy Pond referenced and inadvertently affecting the plot or story. The word "Pond" was what got the Doctor to come out of retirement in the television story The Snowmen and an image on the cover of the book she wrote, Summer Falls, became a manifestation for a Spoonhead in the television story The Bells of Saint John
  • The basic plot has commonality with the Doctor Who Magazine comic story, Thinktwice. As in this story, the Tenth Doctor in Thinktwice fights an enemy that takes memories, and he proposes to defeat that enemy, the Memeovax, by "overloading it" with his own memories.
  • This story features the debut of the incidental music track "Infinite Potential", a melancholy version of "The Long Song". It was later reused with the theme "Trenzalore" and a small sampling of "The Sad Man in a Box" to frame the Eleventh Doctor's regeneration scene in the television story The Time of the Doctor, later released as part of a reprise included in the official soundtrack release for the Series 7 specials.
  • Ellie Oswald is shown to have died on March 5, 2005, the same date as the events of the television story Rose.
  • The scene where pilgrims join Merry Gejelh in singing was intended to be similar to the scene from the classic movie Casablanca where people join in singing of "La Marseillaise" to drown out a Nazi song.[3]
  • This episode was ranked as Doctor Who Magazine readers' least favourite Eleventh Doctor story in their 50th anniversary poll of 2014. In 2023, it was replaced by The Doctor, the Widow and the Wardrobe. (DWM 593)
  • Neil Cross had already written Hide and was initially doubtful that he had the time to accommodate write another script, but he was finally won over when he learned of the production team's ambition for the story. As such, his new script would actually air first.
  • Marcus Wilson suggested the space mopeds.
  • The concept behind having the episode based around an alien planet occurred to Steven Moffat, Caroline Skinner, and Marcus Wilson when realising they had done big location pieces in the first half of the season with A Town Called Mercy and The Angels Take Manhattan, but had none for the second half. They decided to do a story set in "a world created in our studios to make you really feel you're out there", rather than having the Doctor "promise unearthly wonders to his companions, and then get them trapped in an underground tunnel". As such, the episode was designed to allow the Doctor to actually show his new companion the wonders he had promised.
  • The episode replaced a slot that was going to be a script by Chris Chibnall, but he was unable to write it due to his commitment to Broadchurch.
  • Jenna-Louise Coleman named this one of her favourites episodes of the second half of the seventh series, as it was the first adventure for Clara which allowed the audience to watch the story "[begin] again".
  • The episode originally had a different pre-credits sequence, which consisted of a long scene in the kitchen of the Maitland house in which Clara informs the Doctor she cannot come and travel with the Doctor because she has responsibilities to her job, and Artie Maitland asks if the Doctor is her boyfriend. Neil Cross' intent was to juxtapose this "mundane" scene with the vast scale of the planet. However, Steven Moffat thought that at the time in the series the Doctor should be investigating Clara through her parents and Cross revised to include the leaf, an idea Moffat approved of.
  • The living planet was originally referred to as Akhet, a name which survived in references to the Sun Singers of Akhet.
  • The episode comprised Block Nine of season seven.
  • This was the second of four episodes produced by Denise Paul, while Marcus Wilson turned his attention to The Day of the Doctor; he would instead be credited as series producer.
  • The production team aimed to show "the best alien planet" in the show.
  • The flashbacks were the first material to be filmed.
  • The shot of the TARDIS materialising at the Maitland residence was filmed on Beatty Avenue in Cardiff during the making of The Name of the Doctor.
  • Originally the resolution was to be the Doctor defeating the planet with his speech, which Neil Cross likened to "facing down one of Lovecraft's Old Gods: an alien so alien that it's practically a supernatural being." Steven Moffat pointed out that the Doctor had given similar speeches before and was more interested in Clara saving the day. After thinking about it for a while, Cross realised he could incorporate the leaf into the solution.
  • According to Matt Smith, there were "between 50 and 60 prosthetic aliens" in a scene set in an alien market.
  • The Doctor features minimally in the first act because Matt Smith was busy filming pick-ups or reshoots for Nightmare in Silver.
  • Millennium FX's Neill Gorton remarked that he had "always wanted to do a scene like the Star Wars cantina" and had worked on different moulds in his spare time in case they could be used in the future, as making thirty different aliens at one time would be out of the budget.
  • Most of the aliens in the bazaar are made of bits of props left over from previous aliens or ones from other BBC shows.

Rumours[[edit] | [edit source]]

  • The Doctor would regenerate or give away his regenerations. This turned out to be false. The golden light that the Doctor was connected with was his memories, not regeneration energy.
  • Clara's mother was killed in the Auton attack shown in TV: Rose. This was neither proven nor disproven.
  • Whilst the Doctor is watching Clara at her mother's grave, a Time Beetle can be seen on the tree. It is simply the way that the vines and ivy intertwine with each other that creates this illusion.

Ratings[[edit] | [edit source]]

The episode was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC One on 6 April 2013. Overnight ratings showed that it was watched by 5.5 million viewers live, a 28.8% audience share. When time-shifted viewers were factored in, the final rating rose to 7.45 million, making it the sixth most-watched programme of the week on BBC One.[4] In addition, The Rings of Akhaten received over two million requests on the online BBC iPlayer in April, coming in first for the month on the service. The episode also received an Appreciation Index of 84.

Filming locations[[edit] | [edit source]]

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Production errors[[edit] | [edit source]]

If you'd like to talk about narrative problems with this story — like plot holes and things that seem to contradict other stories — please go to this episode's discontinuity discussion.
  • The crack on the glass case containing the mummy disappears and reappears between shots.
  • When Clara tastes the exotic fruit, it is rather obvious that Jenna Louise-Coleman is simply touching the prop to her mouth, not actually eating it.
  • Just before the wipe from the scene, in which Clara tells the Doctor to bring her somewhere awesome, to the scene where the Doctor brings Clara to the Rings of Akhaten, Matt Smith accidentally tears open a control panel.
  • Just before Clara gets onto the moped to rescue the Doctor, and just after the flashback in which the Doctor says, "We don't walk away," the scene cuts to the Doctor doubling over in pain. All though this does not appear in the closed captioning, the Doctor can be heard mumbling, "What more can you want?" The music and sound effects cover this up, and it appears that the producers may have tried to erase this dialogue in post-production. The volume must be turned on extremely high in order to hear this remark.
  • There are numerous instances in the episode where extras dressed as aliens had little or no make-up around the eyes, making the masks obviously look like masks.
  • When the Vigil throw Clara into the wall, the wall moves when her back collides with it.

Continuity[[edit] | [edit source]]

Home video releases[[edit] | [edit source]]

Series 7, Part 2 DVD cover.

DVD & Blu-ray releases[[edit] | [edit source]]

  • The Rings of Akhaten was released on DVD and Blu-ray as part of Doctor Who Series 7 Part Two in region 1/A on 28 May 2013, region 2/B on 27 May 2013, and region 4/B on 22 May 2013.
  • Also, this episode was released as part of the Complete Seventh Series boxset on DVD and Blu-ray in region 1/A on 24 September 2013, in region 2/B on 28 October 2013 and in region 4/B on 30 October 2013.

Digital releases[[edit] | [edit source]]

  • This story is available for streaming via Amazon Prime Video.
  • It can also be purchased on iTunes and Amazon Instant Video. The digital Series 7 boxset also features prequel episodes and Pond Life.
  • In 2015, it was released by BBC Worldwide on BitTorrent and iTunes, in A Decade of the Doctor bundle to celebrate the 10th anniversary of the new series. It included introductions by Peter Capaldi, Earth Conquest: The World Tour and an episode guide.
  • In the United Kingdom, this story is available on BBC iPlayer.

External links[[edit] | [edit source]]

Footnotes[[edit] | [edit source]]

  1. ↑ http://guide.doctorwhonews.net/role.php?code=4314&detail=listing&pg=dwm
  2. ↑ http://guide.doctorwhonews.net/person.php?code=5312&detail=listing&pg=rnd
  3. ↑ DWMSE 37
  4. ↑ Doctor Who Ratings - UK final
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